College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 31 Win-Win Wisdom (1)
(2005 Shandong roll)

composition test questions
Read the text below, according to what the article says.

The emperor builds a house, and all craftsmen gather together.Carpenters and masons compete secretly.One day, the master carpenter was eager to win and blamed the young apprentice.In order to vent his anger, the apprentice secretly filed the master's wooden ruler a bit shorter.As a result, the wooden pillars made according to the wooden ruler were all a little shorter.And those rare woods were paid tribute from afar and could not be replenished locally, the emperor must be furious about this.The master carpenter cried when he knew his death was imminent.At this time, the mason came up with a method. He changed the flat pier surface of the pier supporting the long column into a slightly raised surface, making up for the short part.In this way, not only the palace was completed on schedule, but the carpenter's family was saved, and the design of the stone pier was improved, adding a bit of charm to Chinese architecture.

This story embodies the Chinese philosophy of life: the weaknesses of others can reveal our strengths, and our strengths can also "support" the weaknesses of others, so that both are beneficial.By extension, this is a kind of "win-win" wisdom in competition, which is especially important in modern society.

[Notice]

Please use "win-win wisdom" as the topic, make up your own ideas, choose your own style, and draw up your own title, and write an article of no less than 800 words.Written content must be within the scope of the topic.

Question Analysis
This is a topic composition topic full of the flavor of the times.The intention of the questioner is obvious, it is to guide candidates to correctly view and understand the topic of "competition".People usually think that competition is life-and-death, life-and-death, mutual dismantling and poaching.Today, when almost everyone encounters competitors, is it "win-win" or "forgetting together"? "Competition" became an intelligent topic.This topic composition question has a strong speculative color and the characteristics of humanistic spirit.It is conducive to guiding candidates to pay attention to reality, life and life.Candidates who want to write handily in the examination room must also care about social development, strengthen ideological cultivation, establish a healthy personality, cultivate noble sentiments, always maintain a strong interest in various new things, and cultivate their own insightful eyes that are good at dialectical thinking.

Writing Ideas Tips
When reviewing questions, candidates must pay attention to turning the big into the small, finding the right breakthrough, and flying their emotions.If writing an argumentative essay, candidates can focus on major international and domestic events, such as Lien Chan and James Soong's visit to the mainland.In-depth thinking can be carried out around win-win, what major issues it reflects, what kind of major impact it will have on international and domestic political life, and what kind of win-win it will bring to both parties.If you want to comment on history, write about reality, and discuss life, then you must carefully analyze its win-win performance and essence, results and influences, and clarify what win-win is and how to achieve it.If you write a narrative, you can deeply analyze the connotation of the person or event you wrote, so that the article will have waves and suspense; candidates do not necessarily use narration, but can write the ending first to create suspense and create a sensational effect.Of course, you can also choose other styles.However, no matter what you write and what style you use, it is actually a comprehensive examination of the candidate's thinking quality, depth of thought, breadth of vision, and cultural heritage.

Full score sample essay
The rose of the bereaved, the fragrance in the hand

(a candidate from Shandong)

A famous foreign entrepreneur once said: When others encounter difficulties, I will not sit idly by. I will try my best to help him. Not only will I not lose anything by doing so, but it will bring me honor and let me business more smoothly.This is a win-win wisdom.When we help others, we reflect our own value invisibly and let ourselves win the advantage in the competition.Therefore, we should be good at using the wisdom of win-win, and use our own strengths to make up for the shortcomings of others, so that our own strengths can be highlighted.

When we can actively help others, our own value will be reflected and we will gain a very high reputation.After the end of World War II, the economies of various countries were extremely depressed, and these enterprises were devastated by the war and lacked funds.At this time, most banks in various countries have stopped providing assistance to enterprises in difficulty.However, at this time, Citibank was actively handling various loan businesses and tried its best to save enterprises from various countries. Fortunately, the enterprises developed rapidly due to the assistance, which promoted economic recovery and returned the loans to Citibank on time.This friendly move by Citibank not only did not cause economic losses to itself, but brought it a very high reputation.In the subsequent development, Citibank has made itself one of the world's leading banks with its good reputation.This win-win approach not only saved the company, but also allowed Citibank to demonstrate its strengths.

On the contrary, when we are not good at adopting win-win wisdom and are not willing to help others, then our own development will be extremely slow, because we have not reflected our own value and will not gain the trust of others.A foreign missionary once said: "When they attacked the revolutionary party, I kept silent because it had nothing to do with me; when they attacked the peasant army, because it had nothing to do with me, so I kept silent; And now they're coming at me, what am I going to do?" The missionary, who had not helped others before, was now in a situation where he was surrounded by all sides.Some companies now use the means of defaming others to achieve their own goals. It is extremely unwise to do so. It will not win the trust of buyers, but will tarnish their own reputation.

It can be seen that by helping others to show our own strengths, this kind of win-win wisdom can promote our own development.Then, we must know how to help others. When we are in danger, others will come to help us, which is more conducive to our progress.

"Win-win wisdom" allows you and me to enjoy the benefits together, and is conducive to the demonstration of our own strengths.

score review
At the beginning of the article, the conversation of a famous foreign entrepreneur is quoted to explain the topic skillfully, closely follow the title of the article, and show the point of view.And from the pros and cons respectively, with two sub-arguments, it strongly proves the central argument from two different angles.The article is well-structured, the beginning and the end echo, the structure is rigorous, and the language is fluent.These are all important reasons for getting a high score.

Hand in hand - win-win wisdom
(a candidate from Shandong)

The times make competition a heavy topic, but we can use the wisdom of win-win to cut off the edge of competition, compete with a smile, and walk hand in hand.

Haier Group's promise of "sincerity forever" and the handshake summit of Chinese home appliances, let us understand that competition is not necessarily a competition of the weak and the dripping blood.Use the wisdom of win-win, compete with a smile, and walk hand in hand. Competition can be like a stream, trickling in and out.

competition dances on the shoulders of virtue

Jack, the famous American boxer, prays before every match. His friend asked, "Are you praying for your victory?" Everyone has played to their strengths, and it’s best not to get hurt.”

There is win-win wisdom in Jack's words.A win-win situation as small as the personal field is to use virtue to color the borders of competition, let the refracted sunlight illuminate the journey of walking hand in hand, let competition relax the mind with a smile, make progress together in cooperation, and be honest and trustworthy when people care for each other. A harmonious and vivid picture is painted in it.

Competition smiles in the arms of cooperation
Economic globalization has closely linked countries all over the world into a global village.Competition is inevitable, and cooperation is also the call of the times!
China and France hold cultural years each other, and the two sides have carried out extensive economic and cultural cooperation.French high-end fashion, cooking technology, and high-end cosmetics flow into a beautiful landscape in the Chinese market. Chinese Tang suits and profound Confucian culture are also active on the dazzling stage of France.Listening to the sound of ancient camel bells, the laughter of Roman nobles wearing brocade silk, and watching the cultural year between China and France, "with my beauty, the beauty of the beauties, the beauty of the United States, the beauty of the United States."The two sides mixed the oil paint of cooperation in the competition, making the win-win situation the most beautiful stroke on the picture.

We understand that cooperation can become the main theme of competition, and harmony has become the strongest voice of the times.In a sincere smile, help each other, improve each other, let the strengths of others make up for our shortcomings, let our strengths "support" the weaknesses of others, let each other benefit, and let each other go hand in hand.

Compete with a smile and walk hand in hand!When we were pleased with the failure of France's bid for the Olympic Games, but put up the banner "Celebrate Beijing's successful bid for the Olympics", we were also saddened by Japan's refusal to point the camera at the smiling faces of the women's volleyball girls during the broadcast because of the victory of the Chinese women's volleyball team.Competition embodies the characteristics of the times, and win-win represents the height of a nation!

"The wind is blowing / the moon is shining brightly / I am running on the same field as you / I am smiling at you..."

Compete with a smile, walk hand in hand, win-win wisdom.

score review
The beginning of the article is closely related to the pulse of the times, closely related to the title, and puts forward a very insightful opinion: we can use the wisdom of win-win to cut off the edge of competition, compete with a smile, and walk hand in hand.At the end of the article, repeated rhetoric and excerpts from poems not only strengthened his own claims, but also filled the article with a poetic fragrance.

classic case
Haier Group's "sincere forever" promise, the famous American boxer Jack prays to God before every match, and the mutual cultural year between China and France, etc.

win-win wisdom

(a candidate from Shandong)

The eagle flapped its wings and soared across the sky.That piece of azure blue contains its uninhibitedness and bears its stability. For this reason, the blue sky is more mysterious and more beautiful.

The carp swung its tail and migrated, penetrating the blue waves.That expanse of ocean allows it to be lively and accommodates its agility. Therefore, the sea is more charming and clear.

The oriole sang loudly on the branches, cutting through the dense forest.That piece of gloom accommodates its anxiety and guards its ingenuity, so the forest is a little more deep and more comfortable.

Mutual tolerance, mutual harmony, this is the wisdom of win-win.

Creatures in nature know how to live in harmony and mutual benefit.The legumes transport nutrients to nitrogen-fixing bacteria, which provide nitrogen to the plant.They survive each other, condition each other, maintain harmony, and remain invincible in the competition for survival in nature.This is a win-win wisdom.

The international competition is becoming increasingly fierce. In the face of the surging economic tide, major companies have adopted cooperative methods to survive and develop, and join hands with each other to exchange materials and information. Don't fall, grow yourself up.This is also a win-win wisdom.

Zhaojun went out of the fortress, and it has been passed down through the ages.The Xiongnu stopped their troops and asked for peace, to strengthen harmony, and to seek stability together.For the sake of the people and the stability of the frontier, Zhaojun, the messenger of peace, brought the good news of reconciliation to the people on both sides.This is another kind of win-win wisdom.

Ziqi Boya played the sound of high mountains and flowing water together, and the harmonious melody made each other intoxicated. For them, isn't this a win-win situation?

Liu Bang and Xiang Yu, in order to fight for the world, lost their lives, and in the end Xiang Yu committed suicide in Wujiang, and Liu Bang had to spend decades recuperating. Can this be a win-win situation?
The sky contained the wandering clouds, and was brighter against them.

The sea contains the turbulent waves, and is more charming in the jumping of the waves.

Clouds and waves reflect each other in the sky and sea, shining brilliantly.

This is the wisdom of win-win.

score review
This is an essay that uses the language of prose poetry to express emotions and show talents.The author turns his attention to the natural world and human society. From the mutual accommodation and harmonious coexistence of animals and plants, as well as the actions of human cooperation, interaction, common development, and common stability, the author sees the wisdom of win-win and deduces the topic It was fantastic.

Win-win, a beauty of human wisdom
(a candidate from Shandong)

People borrow flowers to convey love, and flowers borrow people to reproduce.There is a gust of wind, and what comes in through the window is a kind of moisture that will rain.In such a hot and dry summer, how many birds with their seeds migrated north took root on this land.Nature is like this: the fruit is the food of the birds, and the birds are the wings of the seeds.

The carpenter shortened the tribute wood, and the mason made raised stone piers out of it.It not only saves the life of the carpenter, but also adds a bit of beauty to Chinese architecture.

Under the education of mother nature, human beings understand a kind of human and beautiful truth - win-win.

Taking the length of the chi shows the dexterity of the inch; taking the short of the inch praises the length of the chi, so the cooperation of sizes makes the tools of work more beneficial and the work of work better.

(End of this chapter)