College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 32 Win-Win Wisdom (2)
Confucius' "Do not do to others what you do not want to do to yourself" is a win-win in the spiritual sense. It erases the pressure brought about by forcing others, and also reduces the pain caused by being forced by others; "Jiang Taigong Fishing "It is a win-win in action. It avoids the anxiety of fishermen when they are sitting and begging for fish, and also reduces the anxiety when fish are frolicking in the pond.The two do no harm, what we seek is silence, expectation and waiting.So Confucius became famous, so Jiang Ziya waited for his bole.

Zheng He was a navigator who set off with a mighty fleet.He brought the imperial decree, and wherever he went, he sent ceramics, silk, and tea.What he sent was the culture of an ancient oriental country, and at the same time, he also reaped the exotic culture, more praise and worship.He is the "ritual" of the East and the wisdom of the East.When Columbus brought his discoveries to the ocean and became the light for the western colonists to travel by sea, he was just a pioneer of the colonists, coming for the gold and silk of the east.Wherever it went, it brought disaster to the aborigines, took away a lot of wealth, and left a complaint of crying blood on the colony.Therefore, Zheng He's voyage history is golden, full of the brilliance of human relations brought about by "win-win" everywhere; so Columbus's voyage history is bloody, full of evils brought about by greed.

A win-win situation is a kind of beauty of wisdom in human relations, which originates from people who value "rituals".The harmony pursued by the past dynasties is just like the Buddha's saying, "Blessings come when misfortunes pass."This is a kind of kindness, but also a return of wisdom.

Win-win is a kind of thinking of a wise man that comes from nature and is integrated in social ethics, the beauty of wisdom.

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The author accurately grasps the gist of the topic, and highly summarizes it into a judgment sentence, which is used as a title to summarize the full text, highlighting the gist, and being true, refined, and sincere.Then quote extensively, connect topics internally, connect nature and human beings externally; quote classics, analogy and extension;You can't help but admire the author's unique and profound insights and wonderful and in-depth arguments.

Tetris in life

(a candidate from Shandong)

Anyone who has played Tetris understands this truth: if you want to reach the top of the game's success, you must learn to "learn from each other".The game is like this, so why is life not like this?
long and short legs

"Lu's Spring and Autumn Annals Buguang" records a strange animal whose front legs are like a mouse and whose hind legs are like a rabbit.But it often uses its sharp teeth to eat grass and feed it to a kind of animal called Chixu. On the back, escape together.

The survival and reproduction of animals is not a kind of wisdom. Learning from each other's strengths and making up for each other's weaknesses in order to survive is the law of nature, the subtext of understanding in the center of life, and the only way to achieve success.

Stories about Weimar

The friendship between Goethe and Schiller is a legend enough to illuminate half the sky in the history of European literature.The older and mature Goethe gave Schiller stable care, while the young and impetuous Schiller gave Goethe new enthusiasm for creation, so "Faust" jumped out of the water, and its flame passed through the darkness of history to light up today's world. Sky.

If there is no encounter, acquaintance, and mutual support in Weimar, Goethe may still be limited to trivial government affairs, and Schiller may have disappeared in the face of embarrassing life.It is impossible to imagine how bleak the cultural starry sky of the 19th century would have been without them.It is even more unimaginable that if they go astray with each other - after all, there is always competition between geniuses and geniuses - what will be the chapter of history.

Conclusion: summation in differences

Flipping through the notes of life, I realized: no matter in nature or in life, we all seek that harmonious point in the competition: win-win - turning the conflict in the difference into the complementarity in the harmony. There is a saying in "The Doctrine of the Mean": "He who is harmonious is the foundation of the world." But when we accumulate the Tetris of life, we will inevitably encounter mutual extrusion and collision, but as long as we find the place where the long and the short complement each other, we will be sure. Can build new heights together.It will be like Zhu Xi and Zhang Shi, "have a good relationship with each other, and make great progress."

When the rose and the thorn meet, they bid farewell to the gaudy and acerbic, and become sonorous warriors who stand out from the crowd.

When Jordan and Pippen met, they bid farewell to one-man shows and arrogant voices, and became the mythical bulls in history.

You and I meet in life, please bid farewell to suspicion and fame, achieve a win-win harmonious chapter, and build a higher tower of life!
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The article takes the game of Tetris as the touch point, creates a metaphor sentence as the title, and summarizes the full text, and is strung together with three subtitles, with a novel structure and a prominent center.The article is freely quoted, the analysis is pertinent, the language is wonderful, and the reasoning is vigilant. It is a rare masterpiece in the examination room.

classic case
Zheke and Yuji Juxu, Goethe and Schiller, Jordan and Pippen, etc.
gear
(a candidate from Shandong)

There are verdant and tall pines and cypresses, exquisite and delicate wild flowers, high and low, green and red, which are perfectly dyed on the picture scroll; like sails fluttering like clouds, like wooden boats flying with red scales, branches and trees, movement and stillness, achieve success Light cavalry for long voyages.Under the bright sunshine, there is "all kinds of frost and sky competing for freedom", which is also the beauty of fish and birds, man and beast, thunder and lightning, wind and rain, which complement the beauty of all things in the universe.Let the uneven bite, the long and the short complement each other, and let the forward gears run in the competitive world!

God created the sun and the stars at the beginning of the primordial, so we have bright days and brilliant starry sky.When the big roc flies across the sky, the little sparrows are playing on the eaves. Because of the little sparrows, I love the big birds for their lofty aspirations, and because of the big rocs, I love the little sparrows for their gentleness.There is no eternal victory or defeat in competition, but there are many long and short in this meaningful process.Time is recorded for you, and when you look back, it is a tightly clenched gear.Promoting the complementarity of long and short, flashing the wisdom of win-win.

The clock goes by one by one, every step has the rotation of gears, and every step writes down the combination of long and short.Einstein, the master of the altar of science, wrote down Bohr's name in the long journey of life.Maybe it's a red-faced confrontation, or maybe it's an argument that doesn't give in to each other.In the competition, the long and short of the two scientists made up for the great friendship, the science of the human world, and the wisdom that will always shine brightly.A win-win situation is the fruit planted by the hands of cooperation. This fruit belongs to both parties, but is this fruit limited to both parties?Newton and Galileo, Kepler and Tycho, a pair of intelligent stars reflected each other, illuminating the night of ignorance and ignorance of human beings.The forward gears, long and short bite again and again, push forward the pace of civilization.

A win-win situation in competition is a sign of harmony.The spring flowers and the autumn moon jointly interpret the fragrance of classical culture; the poems and songs embellish the bronze-like vicissitudes of China.Drums and horns and silk and bamboo have different rhymes, but the different sounds are not only for the value of their own existence, but also for the meaning of a long-lasting melody like the singing of phoenixes and phoenixes.Win-win in competition is to create a common blue sky and a powerful gear.

There are tall and straight green pines and green cypresses, and there are nameless flowers and plants that have a unique fragrance; like sails flying like clouds, they look more like light boats with red scales flying in the waves; Sparrow; I admire the wind of walking thousands of miles, and I envy the cool rain even more.Long and short bite, there is a round of gears that advance civilization!

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With his profound cultural accumulation, the examinee associates the topic of "win-win wisdom" with gears, and from the gears to everything in life.And use this to lead to the next couplet, galloping imagination, up and down for thousands of years, tens of thousands of miles in length and width.It clarifies a profound truth: everything in the world is tightly interlocked like gears. Although it is full of fierce competition, it complements each other and shines with the wisdom of win-win.The language of the article is beautiful, the philosophical thinking is profound, and the discussion is wonderful;

Win-win, you and I are brilliant
(a candidate from Shandong)

Even if you are a delicate and beautiful peony, you should understand that a single branch blooming alone is not spring, and spring should be a world full of purples and reds.

Even if you are a lone pine standing proudly, you should understand that a single tree is not a hero, and rows and rows of trees are the strong Great Wall that shelters the wind and sand.

Even if you are a sailing boat ready to go, you should understand that a boat traveling alone is not a scenery, and only a thousand sails competing can show the magnificence of the sea.

Selfishness is the view of the fool; creating a win-win situation is the act of the wise.Win-win is the basis of confidence, the source of strength, the searchlight that opens the road to life, and the golden key that opens the door to success.A win-win situation will make you and me brilliant together.

Walking on the beach of history, picking up successful shells with "win-win" written all over them.The battle of the Spring and Autumn Period, the din of the Warring States Period, the heroes contend for hegemony, and compete for the Central Plains.In the face of Qiang Qin's attack, it is the win-win wisdom that makes Lian Po and Lin Xiangru help each other harmoniously. Wu has Lian Po, Wen has Lin Xiangru, and the two cooperate with each other to save Zhao from dire straits and keep Qiang Qin from outside the country. , It also made the two of them memorable for future generations, and the good talk of "reconciling the generals" has been passed down to this day.

"The rolling Yangtze River flows eastward, and the waves sweep away the heroes." Zhang Liang and Han Xin are like two stars, shining in the starry sky of history.General Zhang Liangshan and General Han Xinshan cooperated with each other to achieve the success of "planning strategies and decisively winning thousands of miles away" and the unified prosperity of the Han Dynasty.It is a win-win wisdom that enabled Zhang Liang and Han Xin to establish their prestige and achievements in the Han Dynasty, adding two more dazzling stars in the starry sky of history.

"The shadow of swords and swords has dimmed, and the battle of drums and horns has gone away." Standing on the threshold of the new century, it is not difficult for us to find that the light of win-win is still shining today. Joining the WTO, ASEAN economic cooperation, and the six countries jointly drawing genome maps, this All show the wisdom of a win-win situation, and all of these will surely make our motherland continue to prosper and grow stronger.

A win-win situation will keep the blue sky from fading, pigeons from panic, youth from ending, and mountain flowers blooming in every corner of the world.

Win-win, you and I are brilliant!

score review
The beginning of the article is peculiar. Candidates use three metaphors and hypothetical complex sentences constructed by comparison to form a set of comparisons. In the examination of human nature, they are cleverly connected with the topic and show their own views: selfishness is the opinion of the fool; creating a win-win situation is the wisdom of the wise. Act of.The language is concise and fluent, reflecting the candidates' profound language skills.

Other people's scenery your dream
(a candidate from Shandong)

you stand in the window watching others

Others stand on the bridge and watch you
you decorate other people's scenery

someone else adorned your dreams
I really like this little poem by Bian Zhilin, it is meaningful and profound.There is a long-lasting feeling that makes people daydream.Simple text, like a painting drawn by meticulous brushwork, is delicate and natural.

Others adorn your dreams, but you adorn others' landscapes.A window, a small bridge.You who are nearby and others who are far away have created a beautiful atmosphere for each other.If one side is missing, is there still this moving picture scroll?

There is a kind of hornbill, which is small in stature and specially stops on the back of the rhino to find parasites in the crevices of the skin for the rhino. It can not only feed on insects, but also allow the rhino to protect itself.As for the rhinoceros, it can not only reduce the parasites in the skin, but also rely on the sensitive sense of the little hornbill to know the approaching danger.What a smart couple!They all have their own shortcomings and strengths, but they know how to cooperate with others to achieve a win-win situation.

So are people.A person is always embellishing other people's scenery, and others are always embellishing your dreams.When a person is alone, he will not experience and enjoy such a taste.

Just like green leaves and safflower, without the backdrop of green leaves, safflower will not look so delicate and charming. Similarly, without the backdrop of safflower, there is no greenness and loveliness of green leaves.When they are together, they have the beauty of the branches and the riverside.The people in hell surrounded the cauldron, each holding their own long spoon to get soup for themselves, because the handle of the spoon was too long to deliver the soup to their own mouths, so they were full of resentment.Still the same big pot, still the same long spoon, people take soup from each other and send it to each other's mouth, everyone is full, laughing loudly, happy and happy, and this is heaven.

In fact, heaven and hell are not far apart.Not for others, but only for oneself, this is called hell; not only for oneself, but also for others, through mutual assistance to achieve symbiosis and win-win, this is called heaven.Get out of the ego and find a win-win situation, and you will walk from hell to heaven.

Remember, only when you decorate other people's scenery can others decorate your dreams; if you want others to decorate your dreams, then you have to learn to decorate other people's scenery.Because, this world is originally a harmonious one, a win-win existence.

score review
The examinee found a unique way and discovered the factor of "win-win wisdom" from Bian Zhilin's short poem "Broken Chapter" with his insight, which triggered a wonderful discussion.The argumentation of the article is rigorous, not only positively reasoning, but also contrasting the people in hell with those in heaven, making a positive and negative comparison, and in-depth argumentation, which effectively strengthens one's own point of view.The ending closely echoes the beginning, connects the topic, strengthens the connotation of "Broken Chapter" again, and highlights the main purpose of the article.

(End of this chapter)