College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 37 Encountering setbacks and magnifying pain (1)
(2004 National Volume 1)

composition test questions
(National volume, Jilin, Sichuan, Heilongjiang, Shanghai and other regions)

Read the text below, according to what the article says.

A certain website "4220 chat room" has such a conversation.

A: In a happy life, there will be pain.Some people can face setbacks directly and resolve pain; some people often exaggerate setbacks and magnify pain.

B: Yes, some people can magnify accidentally breaking an egg into the pain of losing a chicken farm.

C: Failure in exams, failure in competition, failure in love, estrangement between relatives and friends, loss of face, even a little bit of them are all pains that cannot be resolved!
[Notice]

Please write an article of no less than 800 words on the topic of "encountering setbacks and magnifying pain".Written content must be within the scope of the topic.

Question Analysis
The test questions select a passage about setbacks and inner pain from a certain website "4220 chat room" as material, and extract the topic of "encountering setbacks and magnifying pain" from this, allowing candidates to examine society, examine life, examine others, examine themselves, and show themselves level of thought, cognition and writing ability.This question consists of two parts, "encountering setbacks" is an objective reality, and "magnifying pain" is a subjective attitude.The topic materials are in the form of conversations, vividly expounding the inevitability of encountering setbacks, exaggerating the pain and the pessimistic mentality behind it. The examples given are close to the lives of middle school students and are likely to arouse the resonance of candidates.This topic belongs to the issue of EQ education, which involves people's life attitude and psychological quality.Examination questions have a relatively clear direction, that is, face up to all kinds of adversities in life, face up to setbacks bravely, learn to think, and correct attitudes.

Writing Ideas Tips
When conceiving a composition, you can connect with reality and analyze the causes, manifestations, and harms of "magnifying pain", especially the root cause of magnifying pain.It can also point out the correct attitude that should be adopted when encountering pain, that is, not magnifying, not forgetting, not obliterating, facing setbacks directly, laughing at pain, sharpening oneself in adversity, and facing life optimistically.When writing argumentative essays, there are many examples from ancient and modern Chinese and foreign countries; when writing narrative essays, you must pay attention to getting closer to the topic, and write clearly about the mental journey in front of setbacks.

Full score sample essay
The wind can pass through the thorns
(Candidate No. [-] in Sichuan)

Life is like the wind.

What an ancient metaphor.You may feel that it comes and goes in a hurry, without a trace; but I traveled through mountains and rivers, scoured all the gravel in time and space, and found the true meaning of this metaphor: only the wind can pass through the thorns.

Dickinson paints life as the inside and outside of a fence, through which we climb layer after layer.As a matter of fact, the hedges are so thick with thorns that we often pass through them bruised and weary.At this time, you can see that the wind is lingering outside the wall, whizzing past indomitably, condensing spectacular traces in the air.

We are going on this ancient journey of life, running through the ups and downs, nirvana in the setbacks, sorrows all over the body, and pain floating all over the place.We are tired, but we cannot stop; we are suffering, but we cannot escape.The scorching sun and heavy rain have come, flying sand and rocks have come, we are full of scars, but we still have to face patches of thorny jungles.

Thoreau said: "The noise of the river can be heard here. The ancient wind that has lost its name is blowing through our woods." Maybe looking back at ancient times, we can understand the true meaning of life like the wind.

Su Shi saw the wind.This once brilliant literati began to fall because of the Huangzhou Poetry Case, wandering in all directions, tossing and turning in trouble.On a moonlit night in Chibi, he was disheartened, watching "the cool breeze on the river, the bright moon in the mountains", and dreaming of his dream of dancing cranes.Facing the frustration as deep as a river, he saw the wind whistling and circling on the top of the mountain, and then passed through the dark thorn forest with the pain of tearing his body and bones.In an instant, the knots of stagnation in his heart and the entangled pain dissipated with the wind.Frustration, pain, only to forget.

Epiphany.

So he was free and unrestrained in the world of mortals, devoted himself to the mountains and rivers, and finally his literary name lasted through the ages.It's just that the wind of that night has been lost to the years, and no one can see it...

Van Gogh saw the wind.He was lying lazily in the sunflower field, entangled in an inexplicable question and pain: none of the paintings that exhausted his painstaking efforts were understood by anyone, and none of them could be sold!For a person who regards art as his life, no one appreciates his own art is like no one values ​​his own life. This is a great pain of being underestimated and despised!This is the biggest setback in a person's life!

Fortunately he saw a gust of wind passing through the sunflower field.The gust of wind was blocked, and an angry roar was issued.Yet they go on!forward!Regardless of being scratched by the ostentatious branches, they succeeded.

So he also succeeded.

Shortly after his death, "Sunflower" and other paintings are rare treasures that are invaluable until today.

……

There are so many stories about wind.

When the wind blows the horn and crosses one silent thorn forest after another, I believe many wise eyes have seen what it is showing.

Only the wind can pass through the thorns.

Only by learning the style, can we despise all setbacks, let the pain disappear, and let the happiness fill the journey!
score review
The student took the "wind" as the carrier and put his love on the "wind", expressing his firm belief in "learning from the wind", "despising all setbacks, letting the pain disappear, and letting happiness fill the journey".The full text is novel in conception, rich in poetic flavor, echoed from beginning to end, and rigorous in structure, and deserves full marks.

when the flowers bloom
(a candidate from Yunnan)

Only through hell-like tempering can one forge the power to create heaven; only through bloody fingers can the swan song of the world be played.

-Tagore
Everyone has a dream, which may be small or big, but they are all so sacred and pious.But it is precisely because of this noble hope that people seem so vulnerable and overwhelmed when setbacks come.

In the face of setbacks, we often involuntarily magnify the pain, as the netizen said: "Some people can magnify the pain of losing a chicken farm by accidentally breaking an egg." I heard a story about a young woman from Henan who lived alone in Chongqing and was about to commit suicide because of emotional setbacks.An organization called "Life Helpline" did everything possible to save her.After waking up, the young woman expressed her gratitude and realized that she was too impulsive at the time.

In fact, this is the evil result of infinitely magnifying the pain when setbacks come.

We often hear such words—"It was so painful at that time", "I was so angry that I fainted at that time", "It was really lifeless at that time!"...

All of these mentioned "at that time".Was it really that scary back then?In the face of setbacks, do we have to choose the path of "magnifying pain"?
Look at the history!Our ancestor Gui Youguang failed eight times, so there was a meaningful article like "Xiang Jixuan Zhi"; the British general Wellington lost seven battles and seven battles, so he had a reputation that will last forever; , So there is such a rhetoric as "the painstaking efforts, the heavens live up to"!Don't say that setbacks are invincible. A true warrior dares to face the blood dripping and the bleak life.Don't say that pain can only be magnified, and a real wise man will only use this pain as a driving force for progress!

"At that time", does the meaning of that time only leave pain and sorrow?

"At that time", Li Bai was not reused by the court, but he did not act discouraged. One chant is the heroism of "An Neng smashes his brows and bends his waist to serve the powerful"!

"At that time", Tao Qian couldn't understand the corruption in the officialdom, the collusion of hundreds of officials, and the common people suffered, but he never said low and self-harming words.

"At that time", Mrs. Curie was suffering from blood cancer, but she never gave up on herself. The first thing she said was the tenacity of "the road to success is not forged with tears but with blood"!

"At that time"...

"At that time", we really shouldn't magnify the pain.Smart people will not stand on the ruins and cry, let us have the great wisdom to face difficulties.

Frustrated as a pen,

Pain is ink,

On this long journey,

We succeed.

In the face of setbacks,

We sing:

Then the flowers bloom!

score review
This is an examination room masterpiece with unique features in conception and layout.The author firmly grasps the mentality of people "at that time" (that is, "when setbacks come") to make a fuss.First, analyze the habitual state of mind and subsequent awakening, and then cite the positive examples of ancient and modern Chinese and foreign celebrities, which convincingly proves an eternal truth: the real wise man will regard pain as the driving force for progress, and the flower of happiness will always be a warrior. And open.The opening of the full text is small, the excavation is deep, the thinking is strong, and the analysis is emotional and reasonable.

A string of footprints that failed to leave
(one candidate)

When night falls silently in the world, it gives those who have wounds the darkest space, let them hide in a small corner, lick slowly until the pain is filled In the whole space, the pungent blue smoke made me shed tears, from sobbing to crying, and crying until the light no longer comes, it doesn't matter...

But as long as you listen slowly and carefully, you can also hear other voices from the crying.

"The starry sky is so beautiful, look, it's the Andromeda constellation..."

"In fact, think about it, the universe is so vast! When you are in trouble, when you are in pain, just look up at the starry sky, and you will feel how small the pain and troubles are."

man!It is really an elusive existence.

I, who have not comprehended the essence of life, are here in bits and pieces, not an article.

I always feel very contradictory, seeing those grotesque posters on the bulletin board of the cinema all advocating "this year's another love masterpiece", "face the tears of human nature", "the second "My Brothers and Sisters""... I feel very awkward, Afraid of pain and sorrow, why do we who like excitement and joy have to go to the cinema to cry and die for irrelevant things.It can't be said that we are tired of laughing, we are more willing to let the pain accompany us to prove that we are still alive?

We who are unable to extricate ourselves from the distress and pain, and who are overwhelmed by setbacks, suddenly look back, only to find that we have not left a series of footprints on the sandy beach of Penghu Bay. Did those sorrows and pains really exist?My pen draws a long series of question marks.

If you insist on explaining those unpleasant feelings as the joint action of the potential changes of the brain in response to external stimuli and the regulation of chemical hormones, then I am in the same boat.But there are people everywhere who like to shout "Who is worse than me!" before the chemical hormone stimulation is over.

(End of this chapter)