College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 38 Encountering setbacks and magnifying pain (2)
As the saying goes, "People just want to plunge themselves into misfortune, immerse themselves in the feeling of misfortune, self-pity, self-comfort, self-concealment. Otherwise, why do you escape from misfortune? Everyone has their own misfortune. They can't believe it. For example, there is only one: There is no happiness without hard work.”

yes!Misfortune and happiness are all a feeling, whether it is social changes, setbacks in life, even if the sky is falling, as long as you feel happy is enough.

So there is a cup of tea, white smoke curling up, a few birdsong, quiet and far away, and the song "Sitting Alone on Jingting Mountain" in the low-pitched singing, but I can't get tired of seeing each other:
All the birds fly high,
Gu Yun went to idle alone.

Never tire of looking at each other,
Only Jingting Mountain.

So there was a flat boat, the water was rippling, a few apes were barking, it was very lively, and the song "Early Hair Baidi City" among the lofty sentiments was already shaking the sky:
The resignation of the Emperor Baidi among the colorful clouds,
Thousands of miles of Jiangling to return in a day.

The apes on both sides of the strait can't keep crying,
The light boat has passed the tens of thousands of mountains.

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Quoting extensively from sources and quoting appropriately are the outstanding features of this article.Candidates cleverly used the rendering of the atmosphere to create "night", "starry sky", "poster street view", etc., combining fiction and reality, and cleverly used poems to enrich emotions and profound connotations, showing the candidates' profound cultural accumulation.

train · tea · spring flowers

(a candidate from Yunnan)

The road of life is my own, no one can help me go on.However, I don’t need to be afraid that the darkness of the shadow will swallow up the bright light of the sun. It is also an honor to face the rising sun once in my life.

—— Xiaoyin

train
When the antelope runs across the night sky like lightning, it is also like a galloping racing car; when the flowing water rushes down, it is like a thousand horses roaring past, and it is also like a never-ending racing car; Also like a racing car that never waits for anyone.The college entrance examination is also like a car, the difference is that it is a train, carrying people running in different directions, whistling past.

I am a passenger on the train.I tried my best to hold on to the edge of the car, afraid of being thrown out of the car by the uneven road and the sudden speed of the train.Occasionally, I will spend a little time, paying attention to the beautiful scenery on the roadside, watching the wind blowing, the clouds rolling around, the beautiful flowers making shadows, the green willows shaking green, the warm wind intoxicating, the rising sun warming my body... Just when I am indulging When I was in an unprecedented scene, my feet shook violently, I felt free in the sky, and my back felt pain——I fell off the train!
God!What kind of fear is this?The road is full of protruding rocks and thorns as tall as me, and the original scenery of bees and butterflies is gone!I became timid, and began to be depressed and desperate: What should I do if it rains heavily one day?What if there is still endless laughter?What if I was bruised all over by thorns?What if I lose my shoes... In that case, blood blisters will form on the soles of my feet, and it will be useless to use up all my strength. I can't help but be ruthlessly laughed at by others, and then I will fall down, or even die?
No!I will never sit still!
So I ran wildly, and I found that I had caught the train!

It turns out that people who magnify falling off the train as death are tantamount to mediocrity and unfounded worry.

tea

Watching the little tea leaves stretch out their tender pistils in the scalding water, floating up and down, there is a kind of positiveness that is calm but not rushing, prudent but not manic, quiet but not sinking.Take a sip, and the bottom of the tongue will immediately produce body fluid, with sweetness in the astringency, and a lingering fragrance that fills the mouth, and flows through the blood vessels, warming the heart and lungs.

Why is life not like this tea?It was washed up by boiling water again and again, and then fell to the bottom of the cup, floating and sinking, sinking and floating, until finally it still exudes the fragrance of life.If you are afraid that the boiling water will burn your heart and lose your life, then the fragrance will also disappear with the wind...

Life should be as calm as tea. Don't be complacent about success, let alone be frightened by setbacks. Face all the turmoil in life with the most calm attitude, and never magnify pain or exaggerate setbacks.

Spring flower
Maybe the ice and snow in winter will cover my heart, maybe I can't get out of the painful state of mind, so I will set a fire, burn up the ice and snow, and burn out another spring.

When the flowers covered the earth, I picked one off, but it withered!

"Chun, will you wither?" I asked tremblingly.

"No," Chun replied with a smile, "what you lost is only a flower in spring, but I still belong to you!"

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Train, tea, spring flowers, three parts, three metaphors, there is a thread running through the seemingly loose structure, that is, "use the most calm attitude to face all the ups and downs in life, and never magnify pain and setbacks." , so that the article has a strong sense of integrity.Prose-like language, poetic artistic conception, appropriate discussion, and hidden philosophy enrich the meaning of the article and add to the charm of the article.

Landscape setbacks

(a candidate from Yunnan)

The benevolence of the mountain lies in the fact that it accommodates the ancient trees in the sky, and also accommodates the grasses everywhere; it breeds the fierce roar of wolves, and also nurtures the weak screams; or embraces the hands, turning the flowing water into a lake; Hanging Maekawa upside down... The mountain stands humbly, silently enduring the pain of the wind and sand of time and the setbacks brought about by human misconduct.

The flow of water is more like the pursuit of wisdom, with a flamboyant personality, and flow is its only destiny.It doesn't think about how to face the stubborn stone blocking the way, but gently bypasses it, letting only a few wisps of moss teach the meaning of the stubborn stone and flowing water.It never dissolves it, allowing the falling leaves and human filth to flow with the water, but never allowing them to germinate on the water surface, only telling them the meaning of water flow with endless loneliness.In the heart of water, there is neither one nor this, when the curve meets the straight, a painful pebble will exchange for the surge of water.

Mountains and waters run side by side, allowing the soul to be tempered, reincarnated, and encountered in the wind and sand of the years. "Why do you keep flowing?" Shan asked, "Isn't ten thousand hectares of fertile land worth your breeding? Isn't thousands of setbacks worth your face? Isn't ten thousand kinds of pain worth your relieving?" Water didn't answer, but still magnified the pain , Rolling up a thousand waves, flooding the village, so ferociously flamboyant.

"Why don't I want to face setbacks, why don't I want to resolve pain!" Water said, "It's just that I have to merge into the ocean, and I have to magnify this pain, teach people in the endless flow and disappearance, and use the ocean of disillusionment to warn people that they must be humble be human."

The mountain did not answer, but just opened its arms, allowing people to hide in their arms, allowing the water to hover at the foot of the mountain, allowing fruits to grow on the trees, and allowing people to survive.

"There are as many mountains of hope as there are oceans of disillusionment." Shan said, "I want to face setbacks, resolve pain, give people homes, and endure all wind and frost." Mountains stand still, while water flows.

The water is unprecedentedly messy. The scenery on both sides of the bank is just a farewell when the waves turn up; the fish in the water are just a goodbye when they turn around.In the water, everything comes to an end, and all pain appears huge.

The mountains and the water looked at each other.

"Actually, you and I are not opposed." Shan said, "We are all waiting. Waiting for someone who can understand setbacks and not magnify the pain; waiting for someone who can silently read the flow of water on the top of the mountain, beside the water Reciting the reflection of the mountain!"

The mountains began to flow, and the water began to be silent.

Water begins to be strong, to face setbacks.

The mountain begins to be weak, to magnify the pain.

score review
The article skillfully uses techniques such as personification, symbolism and metaphor to endow mountains and waters with rational thinking and distinctive personalities.The vastness, tolerance and tenacity of the mountains, and the freedom, willfulness and publicity of the water are fully displayed in the text.It inspires readers to understand and think from multiple angles, whether it is relieving pain or magnifying pain, there is only one purpose: to enrich one's life and move forward firmly!

Can life be occupied by pain

(one candidate)

Although a person's life is short and tens of cold and hot, the setbacks encountered in it may be countless. Some people often magnify the pain in the face of setbacks, so that when they break an egg, they feel that they have lost a chicken farm.In this way, isn't life occupied by pain, but how can life be occupied by pain?
In the face of life and setbacks, what we need is a kind of open-mindedness and detachment, a kind of positivity and freedom, rather than magnifying pain in vain.In a sense, people need pain. It makes us sober and strong, and it makes us grow and mature step by step.But the goal of life is not suffering, let alone the meaning of life. Suffering is just a trial after another on our way to happiness and joy, and we don't have to and shouldn't stay on it too much.

Human beings only have this life, spring hair, summer glory, autumn harvest, winter storage, a fleeting life, why should we magnify the pain caused by all kinds of setbacks during it?Why can't we face it with a smile and resolve the pain one by one?Why don't we enjoy every moment of our life with a calm and peaceful mind?

Whenever I work for the mundane, I can't help but think of the sentence of Layman Qinglian, "Heaven and earth are the reverse journey of all things; When I get it, I feel that my journey of life will stop", I can't help but feel that all the grievances and sorrows in the world have disappeared in just a few decades?Life is short, even if it is a happy life, it will leave a lot of regrets, how can we waste time in the continuous enlargement of small pains?

The color of life is fresh and bright. In the face of setbacks and pain, I will be sad and sad, but I will never let it occupy my life.If I fail in an exam, I will tell myself to work harder; if I fail in a competition, I will learn from my opponent humbly; if I fail in love, I will say with tears in my eyes that at least we can still be good friends; Whatever goes well, I will try my best to resolve it little by little, so that my life is always full of sunshine.

Zhuangzi said: Life is like a white horse passing through the gap between heaven and earth.How precious is this short life!Think about it when you are sad for relief; think about it when you are angry for peace; think about it for gratitude when you are in pain; think about it for strength in the face of setbacks.After all, how can life be dominated by pain?How can time pass by magnifying pain?Let us face setbacks with a smile, and dissolve all unhappiness and pain in life with the sunshine in our hearts!

score review
This article is full of references and rich examples. It not only connects the ancients and their own cases, but also has qualitative analysis, and the analysis is reasonable, full of a kind of penetrating power that cannot be rejected, showing the wisdom and meticulous logical thinking of a wise man, and innovation. thinking ability.

(End of this chapter)