College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 39 Believe in yourself and listen to others (1)
(2004 National Volume 2)

composition test questions
(National volume, Shandong, Henan, Hebei, Anhui and other regions) Read the text below and write a composition according to the requirements.

①Go your own way, let others say it! (Dante)

② People who often ask for directions will not lose their way. (Polish proverb)

③ You should listen to the opinions of others patiently, and seriously consider whether the person who accuses you is justified. (Da Vinci)
④ It is the same mistake to believe everyone and to doubt everyone. (senac)
[Notice]

Faced with various opinions, some people think: whose words should I believe?There are also people who think: Believe in yourself is the most important thing.Please write an article of no less than 800 words on the topic of "Believe in yourself and listen to other people's opinions".Written content must be within the scope of the topic.

Question Analysis
The 2003 National College Entrance Examination Test examines the highly speculative "emotional closeness and cognition of things", and the 2004 national test paper (Shandong, Henan, Hebei, Anhui, etc.) has significantly reduced the difficulty of reviewing the questions compared with last year , the topic is closer to reality, which is convenient for candidates to play better.The material that elicits the topic is a set of famous aphorisms. If you look closely at this set of sentences, it is not difficult to find that "go your own way and let others talk about it" emphasizes "believe in yourself", "people who often ask for directions will not lose their way." " and "You should listen to others' opinions patiently, and seriously consider whether those who accuse you are justified" indicate that you should be good at "listening to others' opinions", and "believing in everyone is as wrong as doubting everyone" shows a kind of dialectical thinking.

Writing Ideas Tips
There are at least three intentions in the composition: [-]. Advocate to believe in yourself and not be too much influenced by other people's opinions; [-]. Don't be blindly confident when talking, but be willing to accept beneficial opinions and suggestions from others; [-]. Dialectical thinking, interpretation or elaboration Believe in yourself and actively listen to the opinions of others.It is worth noting that no matter what kind of intention you hold, you should not be too absolute when expressing it, but strive to be objective and thorough. That is to say, regarding "believe in yourself" and "listen to other people's opinions", you cannot completely deny the latter just because you emphasize the former. Nor can the former be completely negated just because the latter is emphasized.

Full score sample essay
listen to the call of the soul

(a candidate from Jiangxi)

Once upon a time, I was lost in the divergent opinions and could not find the way forward; once upon a time, I was confused in the words of others, and lacked a pair of wings to fly away from the confusion; The sunshine of life... Friends, don't be discouraged, don't be discouraged, please listen to the call of the soul for truth, goodness and beauty, and let the lamp of the soul guide you!

Yes, follow the call of your heart.Don't fall into the quagmire of self-willedness, and don't get lost in a foreign land where you don't know what to do.Turning the pages of history, you will see that King Zhou of Shang did not accept his good words and only ended up with his family ruined. Liu Adou had no idea and could only bury the Kingdom of Shu on the sad and ridiculous stage of life.And when you close the window of your soul and no longer communicate with the world, you can only frame your thoughts and bind your soul, and you will never be able to fly freely in the boundless blue sky of life.

Yes, follow the call of your heart.Don't think about the gossip that has buried countless mediocre people, and don't care about the power of "destruction and destruction of bones" that "a tree is beautiful in the forest, but the wind will destroy it".When you are sad, it is your heart that whispers; when you smile, it is your heart that sings.It is a role model for you to stand still when others point fingers, and the criticism and accusations of others will only better reflect your courage and measurement!As long as you have a clear conscience, your steps will be safe.Do you choose other people's persuasion or endless praise when you are in a high position?When honoring oneself, choose the kind encouragement of others or the flattering praise?When the desire is hard to fill, choose endless self-inflation or a motto-"No desire is strong"?As long as you stick to the lamp of the soul's expectation of truth, goodness and beauty, it will eventually guide you in the most correct direction!
Yes, follow the call of your heart.Don't let your eyes be clouded by the appearance of hearsay, and don't make the spirit of "skepticism" too exaggerated.Regardless of people or things, don't let the balance of your mind always be empty by relying on old accounts!In sublation, we should examine and measure more, and in selection, we should find out the weight of truth.Mozi will cry loudly when he loses his life by crossroads, because he has no spiritual lamp to guide him; Mencius' domineering "in today's world, who else can I have" is the personality under the thought of "doing my part".When you are not familiar with the situation, asking more questions is just like "going into the mountains to ask woodcutters, and going into water to ask fishers", which is a good way to find shortcuts; but when integrity and conscience require you to do this or that, you should go forward bravely and never avoid it. Don't back down!
Listen to the call of the heart, don't use it for yourself, and don't absorb it all.When you have the lamp of your soul to guide you, your life path can be magnanimous, and the hearts of those who love you and those you love will be filled with sunshine!
score review
This is an excellent work in the examination room that is well received by the marking teachers.The article can be said to have reached a near-perfect state in terms of language expression.Parallelism, the use of duality, the metaphor of "the lamp of the soul", the exquisite choice of words, the embellishment of quotations, the symmetry of paragraphs, and the avoidance of repetition in words are all handled very appropriately.

Qu clear as promised
(a candidate from Henan)

You were extremely confident, the Chinese culture that I am proud of!
Wearing a long gown, you have gone through thousands of years, adhered to the belief of "a modest gentleman", fulfilled the agreement of "do not do anything wrong with etiquette", and finally won the reputation of "a state of etiquette"!However, one day, Mr. Lu Xun narrated a farce in a sharp tone: In the tram, a few Confucian scholars were modest and polite, and offered an empty seat to the prime minister.While driving, these "gentlemen" who were still standing fell down in modesty.Lu Xun's accusation has stabbed a serious illness that has never been cured for thousands of years!

Your paper is beautiful, you have sung the lingering "When the golden wind and jade dew meet, they will win but there are countless people in the world", and you have sung the sadness of "Where is the drunkenness tonight, the wind and the moon on the banks of the willows", and finally cultivated the proficiency in rhythm, The empress who is good at calligraphy and painting ruined a country.Until one day, Su Shi's "Great River to the East" came to his face, washing away the sourness and decay in the lyrics and music, and opening up a new world of majesty and heroism.This is the breath-taking atmosphere of Huaxia.

Your exquisite stereotypes have been inherited for several dynasties, and countless elites have been found out. They are full of knowledge and brilliant pens.In the face of foreigners who came to worship, they treated each other as "different"; in the face of sophisticated gunboats, they dismissed them.Finally one day, the fire-breathing guns shot down their Hualings, and then the idea of ​​"Saving the Country by Westernization" was born.The humiliation of modern times kicked off with supreme self-confidence.

Almost stubborn persistence and almost blind congestion make you fall behind in modern times. Therefore, you who have learned lessons open up your voice and accept all kinds of foreign cultures with your generosity.

You violently knock down the century-old house, and the bright red sandalwood is exposed from the thick pillars.An old man squatted down, stroking the exquisitely patterned bricks and tiles with his hands, and told the story about the old house in a choked tone—a story as long as history and as exquisite as painted eaves.Does your courage come from an urban planning map with the title "Modernization"?

You resolutely threw the yellowed ancient books into the fire, as if you wanted to burn the shame of the century.You take down the paintings of black mountains and white waters and replace them with well-printed advertisements; you close the heavy history books and turn to easy-to-understand vernacular Chinese, so the children do not know the allusion of "Kong Rong let the pears" become more arrogant and indulgent naughty.Did your choice stem from a reference note with the title "Modernization"?
You are still wrong.

The sage Zhu Xi wrote in a poem: "Ask where the canal is so clear as it is, because there is flowing water from the source." If a culture wants to have long-term vitality, it must let go of the old and absorb the new; if a culture wants to last forever, it needs to stick to itself.

Believing too much in yourself corrupts you, following others blindly leads you astray.It is so clear, my beloved Chinese culture, in the communication with the outside world, can you be as clear as it is, and still flow?
score review
This article is known for its novel angle of entry and profound cultural background.Facing the topic of "believe in yourself", what this candidate thought of was that "Huaxia Culture" should neither "believe too much in oneself" nor "follow others blindly".Such a conception fits the meaning of the title and is extraordinary, reflecting a superior level of understanding and a valuable awareness of innovation.

Make your own decisions
(a candidate from Henan)

Although Director Liu has reached the retirement age and has gone through the formalities, his hair is black and thick, like a young man, and in the eyes of others, he is using a wig to pretend to be young.

One day, his wife said to him: "Old Liu, don't keep that official position anymore, let others mistakenly think that you are in love with the position of director! You have a Chinese character face and a pair of glasses on the bridge of your nose. You'd better keep it big Putting your head on your back, like a professor or something, be more classy!" After hearing this, Lao Liu felt that it made sense, so he went straight to the barber shop.The master changed his hairstyle, blown it, and sprayed it with mousse.Old Liu came out with a sunny face.

On weekends, the son and daughter-in-law came back for dinner, and saw that their father had changed his hairstyle, as if he had seen an alien.The son said, "Dad, why has your hair changed?" Lao Liu said, "What's the matter with your hair? Doesn't it look good? It used to be consistent for decades, isn't it about innovation now? This is called advancing with the times and keeping pace with the times." International standards!" The son said with a smile: "'Ju' what's 'entering', 'connecting' what's 'track'! You are called retro. Your hairstyle is like an old pedant, a 'man in a suit', old-fashioned. I I suggest you keep a new trend." Lao Liu said disapprovingly: "I am not a young man, and I don't want to revert to my old age, since it has been changed to 'big back', let's 'big back'!"

When the daughter-in-law heard this, she hurriedly stopped and said, "Absolutely not, the 'back' of the big 'back' is the 'back' of the 'back time'. What a beautiful scene!" The son and daughter-in-law said, forced Lao Liu into the car, and went to the car. The barber shop gave Lao Liu a trendy hairstyle.

Another week later, my daughter came back from out of town, saw her father's trendy hairstyle, and yelled at him: "Dad, getting old is getting old, the facts cannot be changed, so don't miss your youth. This hairstyle is not suitable for me. You! Come on, hurry to the barber shop, and I will help you get a small crew cut. The small crew cut is a very connotative hairstyle, otherwise, why do many revolutionaries of the older generation have a soft spot for this hairstyle?"

Old Liu couldn't stand his daughter's persuasion, so he had to follow her daughter to get her hair cut...

(End of this chapter)