Primary school students' full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 11 Characters You, Me, Him (2)
At the age of 12, I am eager to read through the world's famous novels, learn about the heroic and extraordinary life of Paul Kochakin, appreciate Shakespeare's human tragedies, get to know the heroic Liangshan heroes in Shi Naian's works, and taste Cao Xueqin's 10-year writing Just "Dream of Red Mansions"... Oh, there are too many to list, I really want to print them one by one into the long scroll of my memory.

When I was 12 years old, I hid my youthful figure in the mirror, and from time to time I checked whether my appearance would be inferior to other girls. I wore fashionable dresses and danced in front of the mirror.I should... When this desire just sprouted, there seemed to be a voice whispering in my ear: "We must shape ourselves with personality and pursue natural beauty!"

At the age of 12, I also started to chase the pace of politics. I was about to bid farewell to the red streamer and was ready to accept the call of the regiment emblem.But the boat of hope, fearing that it would not be able to withstand the harsh ridicule, had to be "stranded" temporarily.In my heart, against my will, I showed my lofty beliefs as a superficial indifference to cover up my inner shock.However, I also realized that at the age of 12, I seemed to be too mature for these, but 12 years old is by no means the age of hesitation, but should be pursued persistently in the storm, so as to push myself to keep making progress.

When I was 12 years old, I was a little "youthful and confused". I grew up with the sound of "study hard", and I didn't know what it was like to study for further study.Money, power and knowledge weigh more on the balance, is the world still full of love...

Oh, this is me, a little girl who is growing up, but still childish.

The article is completed in one go, combining the methods of expressing characters: language, actions, details, and portrait description methods skillfully, and superimposing the image of a little girl who is becoming mature but still childish with parallel sentence patterns.The writing is fluent, rich but not cumbersome, fascinating to read, and the ending expresses sincere and natural feelings.

I am "alternative"

Wang Bingxin

Hi! My name is Kathy. My Chinese name is Wang Bingxin. I'm 13. Im in Grade Six.
Hee hee, English is not very good, please bear with me.

I, ordinary, ignorant, kind of stupid.The results are top notch.In school, if you ask my name, everyone knows it, and everyone knows it.Seeing this, you all have a little understanding of my character.Modesty and love to brag, humor and love to show off.

In terms of looks, they are far inferior to the school's "Four Beauties".Single eyelid, glasses, braids.In terms of demeanor, he will never be inferior to them.An orange T-shirt and white slacks.Cool! Very cool!He has a manly demeanor and loves to play awe-inspiring.Mantra: Cool!

I have many advantages.Such as good grades, good at making friends, magnanimous and so on.As a result, I got to know many "buddies" and gained a great advantage when evaluating various honors.

Although there are many advantages, the disadvantages are fatal.The worst thing is carelessness.Obviously, he could get 98 points, but he insisted on turning it into 89 points.For this, I don't know how many times I was scolded.Secondly, I love watching TV.I'm a big TV fan, and that's what makes the glasses "ride" on my nose.Of course, now that I'm in senior class, I'm temporarily cut off from the TV.

I have many things, many advantages, many friends, many ideas, and many hobbies.

To be honest, I'm very lazy, if I don't have to arrive at school at 7:10, I really want to sleep from the sun down until the next day when the sun is drying my buttocks.Every night, I have to bear the hopes of my parents, grandparents, and grandparents to do exercises. Sometimes I can’t get into bed at [-] o’clock, which is worse than the trackers on the Volga River.

Well, the sky is starting to darken again, and my boat to the "Title Sea" is about to set sail again.If you're an oddball like me, write me!I am here looking forward to the friendship you bring from afar with swan geese!
Bye Bye!

The selection of materials for the article is novel and bold, and the personalized language expresses the characteristics of the characters, and the ending highlights the theme with endless meaning.In order to better express "I am an alternative", the author is ingenious in terms of language, and uses English at the beginning and the end.The beginning and the end echo, the structure is complete.

I am such a person
Luo Yuehua

I went to the mirror, looked at her in the mirror, I smiled, and she laughed too.I shrugged my nose at her, and she shrugged her nose rudely at me.Her hair is short, she is wearing a sportswear and white net shoes, she looks like a boy.Her name is Luo Yuehua. This name contains the hope of her parents. Of course, she has lived up to her parents' expectations, and she is a little smart.

Not only does she look like a boy, she also has a boyish personality.She loves to play war with boys, and even more loves to set off firecrackers and catch crickets with boys.She said: "Playing with boys, they don't like to get angry, they don't like to cry, they have a good time playing."

Although her character is like a boy, she is a little different.That means she is not very courageous, she is extremely timid.She was afraid of the dark, afraid of being alone at home... One night, she wanted to drink water, but it was too dark around her, so she dared not get out of bed.With it, she picked up the flashlight and walked forward. Although it wasn't too dark, she was still worried.Thinking of the murder cases in the movie, I couldn't help shivering.Suddenly the flashlight shone on a "person", and she shouted "Mom" in fright.When her mother came over, she was already pale with fright, she didn't dare to vent her breath, and held on to the wall tightly.Mom turned on the light and took a look, oh!It turned out to be a piece of clothing hanging on a clothes rack.At this time, she remembered, didn't she hang it herself?Unexpectedly, I scared myself.

She likes to read extracurricular books, read them while eating, sitting in the car, and lying on the bed before going to bed.I don't know whether her parents are afraid that her eyesight will be damaged or that it will affect her academic performance, so they always restrict her reading.She had to hide in someone else's house to see.No way, who made her love reading so much!

She also has one of the biggest characteristics is self-confidence.When she faced difficulties, when she encountered setbacks, she always said three words with confidence: "I can do it!" You see, it was like this this morning.In the morning, her father asked her: "Xiaohua, can you pass the exam?" "I can do it." She said these three words with confidence.

She loves music, especially the electronic piano. When she plays the piano, she is intoxicated by the beautiful sound of the piano.The march is majestic and powerful, and the clear rhythm makes her heart dance together; the lyric song is gentle and sweet, often immersing her in the enjoyment of beauty.

She has a smile on her face all day long, and sings as she walks, like a "happy angel".

what!I move away from the mirror and she disappears too.Now you know it!The one I introduced just now is me.

Writing about myself in the third person is really novel.The article outlines the appearance of "her" in the mirror in a few short sentences, giving people a sense of intelligence, innocence, and mischievousness. What a cute little girl, she is naughty and has a boyish taste.The articles are fresh and interesting to read.

Drinking Poetry

邹游
"The bright moonlight in front of the bed is suspected to be frost on the ground. Look up at the bright moon and look down at your hometown." Whenever I hear this familiar verse, I can't help recalling the interesting stories of my childhood.

When I was young, my mother always asked me to recite poems with her, and over time, I was able to recite a few Tang poems in a decent manner.Whenever my relatives call me "little poet", my heart is as sweet as eating honey.On the day when the moon was full, my mother taught me Li Bai's "Thoughts at a Quiet Night", and told me: Li Bai had to drink before composing poems, and the poems he made after drinking had "fairy spirit", so everyone called Li Bai "poetry". Immortal".The speaker has no intention, but the listener has the heart.I thought: I can recite a few Tang poems and everyone praises me like this. If I can compose a few more poems, even if I can’t become famous all over the world, I will also become famous in Louta Town. By then, I will be a "celebrity" among children , How proud!I decided to learn from Li Bai, drink first and then write poetry.From this day on, I plan every day how to get intoxicating wine.

During dinner, my father was all red, humming a ditty while drinking.I know that the yarn business is good these days, and my father is very happy. It seems that the good time to adopt a "roundabout tactic" has come.I smiled and asked: "Dad, is the wine good?" Dad kept saying it was delicious, and I hurriedly took over the conversation: "Dad, let me have a taste too, okay?" Dad stared: "Kids, What wine do you want to drink? Go, go!" Alas, the first plan failed!
The next day, guests came to the house, and the guests kept pouring wine for my mother, but my mother said that she would get drunk after drinking a little wine, and even Sprite would get drunk if she drank too much.When I heard this, I was very proud. If I don’t have any wine, it’s better to have a "Sprite intoxicating".Before going to bed, I secretly took Sprite to the room and drank more than half of the bottle, but I still didn’t feel drunk, so I had to drink and pour the rest into my stomach.Who knows, I didn't even recite a poem at night, instead I went to the toilet all the time.God is not open, and the second plan was in vain!

Two failures did not discourage me, I still waited for my chance, still wanted the wine.The opportunity finally came. The memory of adults seems to be far less good than that of children. My father had long forgotten my "bad deeds" of wanting to drink, and ordered me to go to a small shop to buy alcohol.I just seized the opportunity, grabbed the bottle and the money and went straight to the small shop, watching the brown wine flow into the bottle through the funnel, the excitement in my heart could not be suppressed.After capping the bottle, I threw the money on the table, and hurried home with the bottle in hand. Along the way, my head was full of scenes of me drinking and composing poems, which made others look at me with admiration!I tiptoed into my room, locked the door, and gently unscrewed the bottle cap.Ah, an intoxicating aroma of wine wafted out.I picked up the bottle and poured it into my mouth, oh my god, it's bitter and astringent, it's really unpalatable!But in order to realize my wish, I closed my eyes, no matter what Sanqi 21, I drank it in big gulps, it was great, the third plan was successful!I picked up the pen and was about to write a poem, when I suddenly felt "golden stars" in my eyes, black shadows were shaking in front of my eyes, my hands and feet became limp, my body tilted, and I fell headfirst on the bed and fell asleep.After waking up, my father told me: I haven’t seen me buying wine for a long time, so he ran to the shop to look for me, but he couldn’t find me, but he got 9 yuan back.The host family asked the west family to look for it, but there was no sign of me.My father was as anxious as an ant on a hot pot. When he got home, he ran upstairs and broke open the locked door with "nine oxen and two tigers". When I was sent to the hospital, I learned that I passed out after drinking, which made him dumbfounded.

I really "I will never die until I reach the Yellow River", and even now I whispered to my father: "Dad, did I read the poem in my dream?" "No!" My father replied puzzled. "Ah", I made a glissando, which made my mother laugh.

The young author mistakenly thought that drinking could make poetry, so he made a plan to "drink". The first two attempts failed, and finally the last "conspiracy succeeded".However, "Until the Yellow River, the heart will never die", the first thing after waking up from drunk is still thinking about my poems.The language of the full text is lively, and the dialogues, gestures and psychological activities of the characters are grasped to describe, which is full of children's interest.

This guy is ambitious

- my confession

孪辰
This guy is hunched over, sitting at his desk like a big lobster. Isn't he tired of studying day and night?Don't pity him, he just thinks about it all day long, and he knows what to dominate the world and unify the universe.If you want to be a great man, you have to go through this kind of training.

I doubt that he will grow up to be a great man.

First, he used to be the squad leader in the class, but he didn't "follow the public and abide by the law", took credit for himself, was unpopular, and was dismissed.For a great man, he has to start from a small official, but he can't even keep the black hat of a sesame official, so what qualifications does he have to be a great man?

Second, he often argues with his classmates, and when encountering trivial matters, he insists on fighting for superiority.His fine tongue is a nuisance, made of phrasing.Besides, the president, chairman, and marshal are all magnanimous, but he can't even do this, so is he worthy of being a great man?
In particular, his Nanke dream is always endless, and he always thinks about adding an imperial robe.It is good to have this wish, but he has never read books on management and politics, and only worships history as a "brother".There are countless history books in his cabinet, such as "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms", "The Chronicles of the Eastern Zhou Dynasty", "5000 Years", "The Art of Mencius' Debate", "Confucius' Art of Life", "Sun Tzu's Art of War", "36 Strategy"... Reading this kind of book will help him get on the political stage in the future, but he read it madly.Talk about historical knowledge with everyone, and no one can talk about him.In my opinion, he knows nothing about fighting. If he really goes to the battlefield, these tactics and strategies will become a piece of waste paper.He is just talking and talking on paper now.He'd better not become a general. If he wanted to, he might end up like Zhao Kuo one day!

In short, he decided that he was destined for great things.

In order to be familiar with the art of war, he actually conducted exercises among his classmates.He claimed to be the emperor of the universe, and killed each other with the "princes" he appointed, which made the class restless.He only has that little ability, but Yelang is arrogant, and he really doesn't know the heights of the sky and the earth.

He always likes to elevate himself, and he doesn't pay attention to famous military strategists such as Patton and Napoleon at all. Even Zhuge Liang, the embodiment of ancient and modern wisdom, is regarded by him as the Amon under Wu.He thinks he is invincible and can become the master of the world.I thought to myself, even if he sits on the dragon chair, he won't be able to wear the crown for a few days, and then he will go back to his hometown to farm with his tail between his legs in disgrace, and maybe he will be insulted by others, leaving a bad reputation forever!

That guy looks exactly like me, and he keeps showing up in the mirror.To put it bluntly, he really has a lot of goods in his stomach, and he is probably the chair of the United Nations in 20 years.

The young author uses the tone of the third person to describe himself in an all-round way from the perspective of others.The full text is rich in content, citing ancient and modern Chinese and foreign figures and events, which enhances the appeal of the article; the language is full of personality, the pen and ink are slightly teasing, game-like, laughing and cursing, showing the true temperament, it is a wonderful good article.

I'm a little worm

何遥
A person who can spend all day on the Internet, a person who wants to ask the truth about everything, that is me.My name is He Yao. I study at Wenqing Road Primary School in Ganzhou City, Jiangxi Province. My English name is Charles Smith. My zodiac sign is Rabbit. My idol is DiCaprio.

My father is a professional in the computer department of the Bank of China, so I have a special relationship with computers.Every winter vacation, I will go to my father to learn about computers, and I am very quick to accept computer knowledge. I will use it as soon as I hear my father say it.Once, when I visited the "White House" on the Internet at my father's place, I forgot to use the return command because of carelessness and shut down the computer directly. The hard disk in my father's computer was almost full the next day.Alas, I shouldn't have been so careless.

I also have a very strong curiosity, and I want to ask why everything.For example: why the United States deploys the "theater ballistic missile defense system"; what are "Star Wars" and "Dawn Project" doing; , all questions want answers.

One of my faults is carelessness. In the exam, when the question is clearly written as subtraction, I take it as addition; when the question is clearly written as multiplication, I see it as division.When doing a question, I often count the first few steps right, and I am wrong at the last step.

My ideal is to study for a Ph.D. in the Department of Business Administration or Finance at Harvard University after graduating from high school. After graduation, I will return to China to open the world's largest Internet company mainly based on Internet and software—"DCN Network Company ", you may see me as the president of DCN Networks in the future.

This is me, would you like to make friends with me?
(End of this chapter)