Primary school students' full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 15 Characters You, Me, Him (6)
I nodded and said "OK".But for some reason, I feel ashamed that I didn't understand what they said just now.Well, let me also say something that they don't understand.So, I simply pointed at them one by one with my hand: "You are called 'big laowai', you are called 'two laowai', and you are called 'three laowai', OK?" This time, it was their turn to be stupid, six blue eyes They all stared at me with their mouths half open, shaking their heads and shrugging their shoulders.Seeing their embarrassment, I smiled smugly.

Soon, we became acquainted. Although we didn't understand the language well, we had a good time relying on my half-baked English and their half-baked Chinese, plus gestures.We were running, chasing, and playing "catch and run" in the yard happily.I was just happy, and accidentally cut my finger and bled. The "second foreigner" saw it and quickly took out a "Band-Aid" and put it on me very seriously.My heart became hot, and I quickly said in English: "Thank you!" Gradually, I found that the "little foreigners" were very friendly, lively and enthusiastic like Chinese children.

When we parted, the "big foreigner" suddenly said to me: "I must learn to call (Chinese) well." Yes, they don't speak Chinese well, but they insist on talking to me. How valuable this is Learning spirit.Thinking of this, I sincerely said in English and Chinese: "I am willing to help you, and please help me learn English, and tell me about your country, okay? Oh, I also want to tell you many stories about my hometown Woolen cloth……"

The "little foreigners" must have understood. We smiled and stretched out our hands to each other, holding each other tightly.I feel that everyone's hands are very warm and strong!
This composition specifically describes a series of stories that happened between "I" and three "little foreigners".The young author narrates the process of their acquaintance and games in a fresh and natural style, with fluent language and organized narrative.Grasping the characteristics of the language barrier between the two sides, the interesting scenes of the dialogue between the two sides are described, which is vivid and interesting.

I was once a "pirate dealer"

Yang Xiaojing

Everyone is familiar with pirates!They stole other people's versions and bulged their own pockets.However, I, a primary school student, also worked as a "pirate", don't you believe it?Believe it or not, maybe you have done something like this too!

At that time, I was in the third grade.One day, the teacher assigned a composition.This is hard for me, because I don't know anything about composition.In the past, I had to rely on my mother's revisions to cope with the composition, but now my mother has gone to other places for further study, which is really terrible!Write it yourself, and you are afraid that you will be "praise" by the teacher if you can't write well.I helplessly opened the drawer and rummaged through the books.Coincidentally, I found the "Selected Compositions of Primary School Students in Ten Thousand Schools" that my mother bought for me.I opened it casually, and there happened to be a composition that met this requirement.Isn't this a ready-made "composition"?Can't I just copy the previous one?What a way!But I couldn't help worrying: If the teacher and classmates see through, then I will be finished!I thought again, this composition was bought by my mother from Jinan, and most of my classmates have never read it.After thinking about it, I "moved" that poor composition to my composition.

The next day, during the Chinese class, the teacher read a few well-written compositions as usual.My article, no, the one I copied was also "on the list".Although the conjecture last night would not be debunked, the conjecture is not the same as the reality after all.When my "pirated" composition was read by the teacher, I shuddered all over.Fortunately, my "piracy" behavior was not exposed on the spot.But unfortunately something happened.When I returned home with the "pirated" composition, my father happened to arrive, and he repeatedly asked to read my "no revision" composition.Naturally, I rejected it at first, but my dad exposed his "unique" "bossy" face and forcibly took away the composition.When my dad finished reading it, he quickly changed the two essay papers into four, and then eight... Finally, he ordered me to write two more essays in a "sacred decree" tone, As my "reward".

Did you see it?This is the "painful" price I paid for "piracy".In the future, I will never be a "pirate" again!

The language of this article is popular, fluent, simple and natural.It described in detail that "I" plagiarized the model essays on the composition paper to prevaricate the teacher's writing requirements.Using "piracy" as a metaphor for plagiarism can be described as ingenious, and in writing, the young author is even more witty in choosing words and making sentences, sparking sparks of thinking everywhere.

Liu Xiang in my heart

Wu Fan
As soon as Liu Xiang is mentioned, we will think of the scene in the Athens Olympic Games where he held the national flag of the People's Republic of China in both hands and flew onto the podium of the men's 110-meter hurdles champion.

Liu Xiang, you are amazing!You are not only on the podium of the world champion, but also another insurmountable height.

Liu Xiang, you have not only brought glory to the People's Republic of China, but also made us proud of the Chinese nation in the world; you are also the pride of the whole Asia, because you are the first Asian to win the gold medal in this event.Because of you, we have the pride of being Chinese.Liu Xiang, behind your excellent results, I don't know how much unimaginable hard work you have to put in, how many holidays you gave up, and how many opportunities you lost to reunite with your family.

Liu Xiang, you are not only a leader in the sports field, but also a caring person.You have achieved good results, and the motherland has given you high honors and rewards. However, facing the people in the disaster-stricken areas, you have shown your love and returned the honor given to you by the motherland to your parents and fellow villagers.Liu Xiang, you are still a person of many talents. With your beautiful and beautiful singing voice, let us share the joy of victory with you!

Liu Xiang, in my mind, you are a big brother full of love, a multi-talented star, a giant, and a national hero!It is a good example for me to learn from.

This article successfully shaped the image of Liu Xiang in my mind.Following the moment when Liu Xiang won the championship in the 110-meter hurdles competition at the Athens Olympics, Liu Xiang was well-known by the Chinese people and became an idol in the minds of many elementary school students.The layout of the article is reasonable, the sentences are fluent, and the feelings are sincere, which makes people feel friendly when reading.

Teacher Ma's mouth
Shi Deyu

With a fat body, a round head, short hair, and a pair of short-sighted glasses on the bridge of the nose, this is my first composition teacher—Ms. Ma.Since learning composition from Mr. Ma, my writing level has improved rapidly.However, what I want to talk about today has nothing to do with my composition. What I want to talk about is Teacher Ma's distinctive mouth.

When it comes to Mr. Ma's mouth, the students must think of eloquence and witty words, of course!However, I found another feature of her mouth - delicious.

Once, we were all buried in writing essays.When I looked up and thought about the problem, I saw Teacher Ma was gnawing on a big "Red Fuji" apple.I couldn't help frowning, and asked: "Mr. Ma, why do you eat in class?" Who knows, she said solemnly: "Apple soothes the throat, I have taught for so long, and my voice is almost hoarse." .”

Every time Teacher Ma eats in class, she will find "excuses".

Once again, a classmate ate sour ebony in class and was caught by Teacher Ma.Naturally, that classmate would not have any good results - the sour ebony was confiscated.We thought that the "sinful" sour ebony would be thrown into the trash can, but who knows, Teacher Ma opened his mouth wide and "stored" most of the bag of sour ebony into his stomach.We couldn't help saying in unison: "Teacher Ma, this..." Before we finished speaking, Teacher Ma put on a serious look again: "It's such a pity to throw away such a delicious thing. Waste is the biggest crime!" We were all rendered speechless.

I think that students who are familiar with Teacher Ma will definitely be impressed by her mouth.

The idea of ​​the article is good, the young author turns his attention to the life around him, and writes about the things and people around him.The young author observes carefully and is good at discovering, and writes about the interesting things about Mr. Ma in vivid language-every time he can find a "magnificent" reason for his own eating.

my piano teacher
Meng Jingbo

On October [-]st of this year, Uncle Liu from the Conservatory of Music came to my house to visit my father. He is a very famous pianist.Just when my father was shopping for vegetables, my mother made tea for Uncle Liu and said, "Mr. Liu, I have wanted to find you for a long time. Please teach Jingbo to play the piano for my family to see if she plays correctly." Uncle Liu said: "What's wrong with that?" Mom said, "You don't know. I'm worried about her piano teacher. He can't play the piano himself. I'm worried that he will lead the child astray." Uncle Liu asked strangely. : "How can I teach if I can't play the piano?" Hearing what he said, I was at a loss in my mind. In order to let Uncle Liu test it, I mustered up the courage and started playing.

I played "Hanon Piano Etude" first, and then played the theme song of "Dream of Red Mansions".Playing and playing, I couldn't help but think of my piano teacher.

He is in his thirties, tall, energetic, kind and serious.When I was four years old, he taught me notation and how to play it on a small electronic organ.When I was seven years old, my family bought a piano, and he began to give me piano lessons formally, every Monday and Wednesday night, without interruption.He is very busy with work, so he squeezed time to give me lessons.He did not know how to play the piano himself, but only knew the score and other instruments.In order to teach me how to play the piano, he bought a lot of books and learned by himself first. Sometimes late at night, he would prepare lessons for me and teach while learning.When teaching the piano, he is meticulous and patient.I remember that when I was learning the bass string with my left hand, I couldn't play it, and I was so anxious that I wanted to cry, but he still patiently taught me over and over again.Sometimes he is so serious that it scares me.Once, when I didn't pay attention to the class, he gave me a hard lesson. I cried, but he still criticized me.

Over the past few years, under the guidance of my teacher, I have learned to play many pieces, and now I can play independently.I think he is the best piano teacher in the world.

Before I knew it, my song ran out.Uncle Liu clapped his hands and applauded, and praised: "You play the piano really well. You will definitely win a prize if you participate in the competition." At this moment, Dad's voice came from outside the door: "We don't learn piano for the competition." Walked in with food.I pointed to my father and said to Uncle Liu, "He is my piano teacher."

This article can be said to have a unique selection of materials and innovative ideas, from my mother's doubts to "my" memories of learning the piano and the final "truth revealed".The full text is easy to understand, yet full of twists and turns, and the ending is uniquely designed, leaving readers with a broad space for aftertaste.

"The Rat" Story
Li Donghong

I was born in 1996, which happened to be the Year of the Rat.When I was born, my mother said excitedly: "A smart and cute 'little mouse' was born." Since then, I have formed an indissoluble bond with the mouse.

As time goes by, I grow up gradually, and I also know some stories about the mice in the twelve zodiac signs.It is said that in ancient times, there was a god in the sky who wanted to accept 12 apprentices at Nantianmen.The mouse then traveled long distances to Nantianmen and became the great apprentice of the gods.Since then, there have been the rats of the Chinese zodiac.

Although the mouse is small, exquisite, clever and cute, its reputation outside is not very good.No matter who it is, as soon as they hear the word "rat", a feeling of sneaking and sneaking arises spontaneously.Therefore, people have compiled many idioms for mice, such as "short-sighted" and "cowardly as a mouse"...

Speaking of this "short-sightedness", it literally means that a mouse can only see one inch away; as for me, it is not much different from the idiom. Although it is not only one inch away, but three meters away It's blurry.Because I didn't pay attention to protecting my eyes, I was already highly myopic at a young age.For this reason, I don't know how much loss I suffered, my academic performance plummeted, and I was often criticized.Eventually, I had to wear glasses.But with glasses, my troubles increased.

There was a long-distance race, and we stood on the starting line.When the teacher gave an order, we all rushed out.I took the lead and ran at the forefront.But when I ran two laps, because my head shook so badly, I only heard a "snap", and the glasses fell on the track.I quickly squatted down and fumbled everywhere. The glasses were really close in front of me, but far away in the sky. It took me a lot of effort to finally find them.By the time I got up to catch up, I had lost my name to Sun Shan.

Speaking of "cowardly as a mouse", everyone will think that people who belong to the rat must be very timid, but I am "cowardly".Once, my cousin and I went to grandma's house.Walking on a country road, I suddenly found a small snake running towards the grass.My cousin was scared out of her wits, but I found a branch and chased after it, and I didn't stop until I drove the little snake out of sight.Do you think I'm brave?
Although I am very courageous, I am still afraid of one animal—dog.As the saying goes: "A dog takes a mouse - mind your own business", it is because dogs have this bad habit, so whenever I meet a dog, I am frightened, lest I avoid it.This is the story of my "mouse", everyone, please don't laugh at me.

Grasping the typical characteristics of things to describe is the biggest feature of this article.The young author accurately selected two points of "short-sightedness" and "cowardly as a mouse" to cut in, combined with his own reality, and vividly portrayed the image of a smart and cute "little mouse".The material selection and conception are ingenious, and the description of typical cases is vivid.

Cut in the king
Anqi Guan

"Ah! He made the teacher angry again!" "That's right, why is he interrupting so much!" "That's right, that's right!"

who?I took a closer look, and it turned out that I was talking about Zhang Tianmu, the "interrupting king" of our class!As soon as I heard it, I secretly agreed with this statement in my heart.He is really a "cutting-in king", no!It should be "Poor mouth Zhang Damin"!This was sealed by our head teacher.By the way, you don't know his story yet!Let me just pick two things to talk about!
One Wednesday, in a nature class, the teacher told us about the transmission of information.Teacher Wang said: "Mobile phones are used to transmit information now..." Before Teacher Wang finished speaking, Zhang Tianmu stood up abruptly: "If you want to talk about mobile phones, the most used ones are Samsung mobile phones, but my family No Samsung..." He chattered a lot.Teacher Wang was not only not angry, but also jokingly asked: "Are you a salesman for Samsung?" His dark eyes rolled around, and he said calmly: "Thank you for the compliment, please support Samsung more in the future." Company!" Teacher Wang couldn't laugh or cry, and the students roared with laughter.

Another time, in the composition class, Teacher Yu was enthusiastically instructing students to write compositions for spring outings. When Teacher Yu asked: "What did you see in Shaoshan?" "Chairman Mao's former residence!" Everyone scrambled to answer.Suddenly, a resounding sentence came out from Zhang Tianmu's mouth: "Mao's restaurant is delicious and affordable! It is opened by the family of Mao Fengqian (our classmate), and everyone can eat for free!" After finishing speaking, he smiled very proudly. .Teacher Yu suddenly became "furious", and "invited" Zhang Tianmu to the podium.Zhang Tianmu lowered his head and stood there silently, the complacency just now had disappeared.

Alas, Zhang Tianmu is such a "cutting-in king", always making people dumbfounded.

Zhang Tianmu in this article is really a veritable "interruption king".His experience of "interrupting" makes readers laugh. Under the young author's wonderful pen, "The King of Interrupting" appears so vivid, vivid and full of life, which makes us feel a rare reality.

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