Primary school students' full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 17 Campus Express (2)
It's been many days since school started.Today, the teacher is going to recruit a group of class committee cadres.Who doesn't want to be a cadre of the class committee?Everyone said like a pot: "I will be a sports committee member!" "I will be a math class representative!"

At this time, the teacher walked into the classroom with a smile on his face: "Students, I don't say anything, you already know that the main task of this class is to recruit a group of class committee cadres. Let me introduce myself!" Then, the teacher went on to Said, "I invite Cao Zhenxing to introduce himself, welcome!" After a burst of thunderous applause, a classmate stood up, and I took a closer look, and it turned out to be Cao Zhenxing.He walked up to the podium calmly, touched the red scarf with his right hand habitually, and then introduced himself to the students in standard Mandarin: "My name is Cao Zhenxing, and I live in Ximiao Village. Squad leader, the fifth-grade squad leader, study group leader, and sports committee member. The fourth-grade Chinese competition won No.2 in the whole grade, and the fifth-grade "Love My Hometown" essay won the second prize in the town. I have served as the squad leader for many times and have certain experience , I am the class monitor, I must be responsible to the teacher at the top, and responsible to the students at the bottom!" After he finished speaking, there was another round of warm applause.The teacher smiled again and announced: "Student Yu Hongjuan is invited to give a speech!" Yu Hongjuan walked up to the podium shyly, looking a little timid.She looked at the students with a smile, and said, "My name is Yu Hongjuan, I live in Yujiagou Village, I am the representative of the Chinese class in the third, fourth, and fifth grades, I am No. 1 in the final exam of the third grade, and I am the No. .1, No.1 in the school in the final exam of the fifth grade. Although I have never been a monitor, I love this job very much. I believe that I will do this glorious and arduous job well!" Then, there was another burst of thunder Applause rippling in the classroom.Then, several students gave vivid speeches.

In the end, the teacher recruited Cao Zhenxing as the class monitor; Yu Hongjuan served as the deputy monitor because of his lack of experience; Cao Zhenxing, Yu Hongjuan, Yu Runcheng, Cao Peng, me, and Cao Guofu were the study group leaders; Chinese class representative; Zhang Jianhua as math class representative; Liu Dongdong as natural class representative; Cao Guofu as social class representative...

This recruitment exercised the oral expression skills of the students, which benefited the students a lot.

With vivid and concise brushwork, the young author shows us the competitive consciousness and enterprising spirit of contemporary primary school students.The article intentionally portrays the speeches of two students, Cao Zhenxing and Yu Hongjuan, reflecting the character traits and inner thoughts of the characters, allowing readers to feel their positive spirit.

I learned to lead the class
Anonymous
When I was in the third grade, I served as the squadron leader.One Tuesday afternoon, the teacher went out to attend classes. Before leaving, he assigned homework and asked me to be in charge of the class.

Because this is my first time leading a class, I certainly lack experience.I imitated the teacher's appearance and stood on the podium solemnly. If there was a slight noise in the classroom, I would check it out.Suddenly, a burst of voices continued to pass into my ears.oh!It turned out that it was "naughty boy" Shang Hongbo and Li Chen whispering.I yelled: "××, do your homework quickly!" "Follow the order!" ×× replied in response.Unexpectedly, this "compliance" made the whole class burst into laughter.I turned around and saw XX secretly making handicrafts. I strode up and snatched his handicrafts. XX showed a sad look and said, "Why are you robbing my handicrafts!" I was angry Said: "Why don't you do it, tell you to do your homework quickly!" After finishing speaking, there was only a sound of "哗啦", and ×× and ×× over there fought again.I didn't care about 21, pushed them away, and said angrily: "Why are you fighting, you want to fight!" They both cried and "defended" themselves.The matter of ×× and ×× here has not been dealt with, and there is another yelling... Faced with the chaotic phenomenon, I said angrily: "You don't do your homework well, wait for the teacher to come back, see if I won't tell you shape!"

When I was very anxious, the team leader Xiao Miao stood up and said calmly: "Students, you all like our teacher, so what should we do if she is not here? You see, XXX students observe discipline! We should learn from her." Suddenly, the classroom fell silent.Only the sound of "squeaking" flipping books and "swiping" writing can be heard.

At this time, a big question mark was drawn in my heart: Classmate Xiao Miao could maintain good discipline with only one sentence, but I made a mess of discipline after a lot of effort.Oh, what's going on?Later, the teacher solved the mystery for me.

Whenever I lead a class in the future, it will appear in my mind again, making me know what to do.

The plot of "I Learned to Lead the Class" is very simple, but the article does not lose its characteristics because of its simplicity.The little author narrates his own experience of leading a class. The same situation is treated differently to achieve different effects. The comparison makes the little author understand a truth.Classmates, do you understand?
A debate in the class committee

Anonymous
During the extracurricular activities on Monday afternoon, there was a lot of noise and arguments in Mr. Zhao's office, the head teacher.The fourth grade class committee is having a heated debate on the topic of "how to treat underachievers". The atmosphere is quite active and even a little tense.

Squad leader Liu Zheng spoke first and said: "For the few backward students in my class, I think we should try harder, especially the students who are class committee members should take the initiative to help them." Before the squad leader finished speaking, the impatient deputy The squad leader, Wang Hu, opened his mouth like a cannonball: "Whether to help or not, our class is not rated as an advanced class, and it's not their fault. Let me see, I can no longer accommodate these 'big problems'. You Let him take an inch, and he wants to go in a foot, stepping on his nose to reach his face, it is getting more and more outrageous."

"That's right, Li Xiaoning broke the glass on purpose yesterday."

"This morning Zhang Zhi scolded the street because he got 45 points in the math test."

"I don't think it's okay to be soft on these people, so I might as well change them to hard ones and let them be fired."

Several students agreed with the deputy squad leader's opinion.

At this time, Li Hong, the study committee member, stood up and objected.She said: "I think these students have shortcomings, but we should see their progress. I also saw Li Xiaoning helping the students on duty to sweep the floor yesterday."

"I agree with Li Hong's point of view. You can't just look at a moment when you look at a problem. I saw with my own eyes that Zhang Zhi was reviewing homework at home at 9 o'clock on Sunday night. I think as long as we unite them and find ways to help them, they will be It will get better." Culture and Sports Commissioner Wang Xiaogang continued.

"Forget it, don't fantasize about it. What can you think of? Tell me to fire Zhen Zhen first, that's the best way." This is the voice of Yang Tian, ​​the discipline inspection committee member who is outspoken.

The students expressed their opinions and rushed to speak. The more they talked, the more excited they became. No one would let anyone else go. The office seemed to be boiling.I took a peek at the teacher, and saw him sitting there as stable as Mount Tai, not saying a word, just looking at everyone with a smile.At this time, he suddenly turned his eyes to me. From his hopeful eyes, I seemed to understand something. I stood up courageously and said: "Students, I am a well-known "big problem" in the whole school. I can’t seem to find any merits in me. I was expelled by the principal last semester. It was Mr. Zhao who endured my abuse and insults to him and came to the door three times against the wind and snow to enlighten me, educate me, and help me, which made me expelled. The two-month "big problem" returned to school and became the top student in the class. I thank the teachers and classmates for their help." Speaking of this, I could no longer control my emotions, and tears flowed down my face out.

The students fell silent, and the deputy squad leader who was very tough just now fell silent, and Li Hong sobbed.

Teacher Zhao took the lead in applauding.

Applause filled the entire office.

The students turned their eyes to the teacher and waited for the teacher to speak.But no one would have thought that Mr. Zhao announced the end of the meeting, and the students walked out of the office with a smile as if they had realized something, and returned to their "posts".

Composition often has to write about the "big events" in our life and study. As long as we have the heart, we don't have to worry about having nothing to write.The young author captured the important issue discussed by the class committee of "how to treat underachievers", and wrote it into the composition.In the heated discussion, some advocated help, while others advocated expulsion.The young author's speech, starting from his own reality, has infected and educated everyone to a certain extent, so that everyone's thinking can be unified.The brilliance of the article is that the dialogue between the characters is full of personality, and the plot is full of twists and turns in the language portrayal.At the end, the pen peak stops suddenly, leaving room for the reader's imagination.

Contest
Wang Jie
When it comes to my math teacher, there is only one word - "fierce", but I had a contest with him.

A few days ago, the Chinese teacher had something to do at home and asked for leave from school.look!In our favorite Chinese practice class, the one who walked in was the "fierce king" math teacher who was recognized by the students.The students were furious immediately, but there was nothing they could do.So, after class, they all ran to me, the monitor, to complain, and asked me to find a way for them.But what can I do with the teacher!At this time, "Smart Star" Jiang Peng came, "Well, there is one way, I'm afraid you..." Jiang Peng deliberately dragged his voice. "What am I afraid of? Tell me quickly!" I urged anxiously. "Go and reason with the math teacher!" "Why don't you have a Chinese teacher for theory!" "Why don't you have a teacher, isn't it you!" "When I heard it, I almost fainted...

I lingered in front of the teacher's office, but I didn't dare to go in.Thinking of the encouraging eyes and hopeful expressions of my classmates, I resolutely walked in. "What are you doing here?" "I...I'm here to talk to you." For some reason, I used Jiang Peng's words. "Theory?" This time it was the math teacher's turn to be surprised. "You took away our Chinese class. If you don't ask for your theory, who can you ask for the theory?" I don't know where I have such boldness! "Your Chinese teacher didn't come, I just took over temporarily." "No, the math book is almost finished, and the Chinese book is only halfway through!" "Then what do you think?" "I'll be a teacher!"" You, are you okay?" The math teacher glanced at me with doubts written all over his face. "How do you know I can't do it if you don't let me try?" I gritted my teeth and issued a military order: "If I can't do it, I'd rather let you dismiss me as squad leader." "If you can do it, I'll give you a promotion." Jue, I will promote you as 'Teacher Xiao Wang'." The math teacher was also unequivocal.

Since this "theory", the math teacher seems to be a different person.In class, he was pleasant and did not lose his temper.As for me, in order to be promoted to "Teacher Xiao Wang", I nervously previewed the text. I know that only by mastering the text can I give my classmates a good class.And my close buddies also offered suggestions for me one after another, some looking for books for me, some looking for writing cards for me, they were very busy.What was even more unexpected was that Jiang Peng didn't know what magical powers he had, so he brought all the teacher's tutorial books.In order to be a competent "Teacher Xiao Wang", I also play games with my classmates like a Chinese teacher, so that students don't have to worry about writing diaries.I also gave all the toys that I was reluctant to touch on weekdays to several well-known "naughty kings" in the class.

After some hard work, those troublemakers behaved much better, and the class was calm.One day, I suddenly found a figure flashing by the back door and window of the classroom. I chased it out and found out that it was the math teacher.I asked him if something happened?He said he wanted to talk to his fourth-grade teacher about something, but instead he went to the office.I think there must be something strange about this matter. I think the math teacher may be worried and is watching me secretly.

In a blink of an eye, a week has passed.I decided to let the math teacher come to see my strength.I was afraid that the math teacher would say that I was a liar, so I asked him to hide outside the window and listen.Ho!The math teacher was really obedient and did what I asked.Because I had made very good preparations, I was elated and vivid when I spoke on the podium, and the students also listened attentively.

After class, I ran to the math teacher and asked, "How is it?" "Admiration, admiration, Teacher Xiao Wang!" Ho!The math teacher really kept his word, and I was so happy that I jumped three feet high.The math teacher just smiled and left.

"I won, I won!" I called all my best buddies, I wanted them to celebrate my success, but they punched me one by one: "You still win, do you know how many classmates the math teacher has found?" Do you want to talk? Do you know where those tutorial books came from? The math teacher found them and told us not to tell you.” After hearing these words, I couldn’t believe my ears, and opened my mouth again, rushing Looking at the back of the math teacher going away, he shouted: "Teacher, we all won!"

This article is novel in material selection and ingenious in conception.Through a "competition" with a mathematics teacher by the young author, the final result is a "win-win" story, which portrays the image of a student who is brave to innovate and a "fierce" teacher who really thinks about students.The article writes in detail about "I"'s apprehension of establishing a military order and the process of studying hard in class from the front, and briefly describes the teacher's care for "me" and help to "me" from the side.There are details and slightly, and the details are appropriate.The characters are vivid, and the description of events is vivid and natural.There is a strong teacher-student relationship in the text.

cute campus

Anonymous
Along the comfortable path leading to the school, I came to the quiet school gate. The rising sun shines on the beautiful flowers and green trees, making them shine. Ah, this is the first time I saw our school so beautiful!
You see, the most eye-catching thing is the circular fountain in the middle of the campus. The pool made of terrazzo is filled with clear water, and a strange-shaped rockery is piled up in the middle. The shining water column passes through the small holes in the rockery. , sprayed upwards like an arrow, drew a long silver halo in the air, and fell back into the pool, splashing sparkling water.

The northernmost part of the campus is the teaching building with red tiles and gray walls. The clean glass reflects the morning sun and looks brighter.In front of the building are green pines and cypresses and colorful flowerbeds. The rhododendrons in the flowerbeds are smiling and the roses are shaking their petals, attracting groups of butterflies to dance.

There are a lot of sports equipment in our school.To the west, there are slides and horizontal bars.Students somersaulted on the horizontal bar to practice their arm strength.On the east side, umbrellas, parallel bars and ladders are respectively placed.Every time get out of class was over, we sat on the revolving umbrellas and spun happily. The buildings and trees in front of us turned around and turned back quickly.We also climbed the ladder staggeringly, and the students who climbed up would look down and wave to others proudly; we stood on the swing and swayed it quickly, making "crack" laughter from time to time.The wind wiped our faces, how happy it is!We all agree that we are the happiest people in the world.

Outside the school wall, a few poplars poked their heads in and looked at our lovely campus, as if they wanted to integrate themselves into this pleasant children's paradise.

School is the place where we live and study, and it often appears in the composition.To describe a school, we must be good at discovering the characteristics of the campus, and this characteristic may be the place that impresses us the most on the campus.For example, the young author of this article highlights the "beauty" of his own campus.The article takes "beauty" as the main line, and around this main line, it introduces us to the lovely campus in order of orientation.The young author has relatively solid basic skills. The full text has narration, description, discussion, and lyricism, and uses rhetorical techniques such as metaphor and personification to fully express the young author's love for the campus.

I see QQ hot

Zhang Yumeng

There was a student who lost his wallet at school and was extremely anxious, while another student picked up the wallet and returned it to the student who lost the wallet. The student's heart was full of gratitude, and the first sentence was: "Too Thank you! Dude, what's your QQ number? I'll add you!"

This is a classic little joke about QQ. Although it is a joke, it also has a basis in life.It should be said that this kind of thing is commonplace on campus.

(End of this chapter)