Primary school students' full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 18 Campus Express (3)
Now, if a certain person wants to contact others, when asking for their contact information, he will no longer say: "What is your phone number?" Instead, he will ask: "What is your QQ number?" Instead of asking for his phone number, he said with an elder's attitude and a lesson-oriented tone: "No QQ? Apply for one quickly! Otherwise, you're too outdated!"

As a result, almost all students in the school have a QQ account, and some even apply for five, six, seven or eight QQ accounts by themselves. (In this way, it is really a waste of virtual resources!) Moreover, the students’ various mantras were also unified: “What’s your QQ number? Add me (you)!”

Not only that, after the students fell in love with QQ, they talked about QQ in their mouths and thought about QQ in their minds, and they didn't restrain themselves in class.Once, a mathematics teacher in a certain class asked the students when they talked about "the use of mathematics": "In addition to zip codes, telephone numbers, and ID numbers, what else is arranged in numbers?" When the students heard it, they said in unison: " QQ number!"

Things got worse and worse.Because I am too obsessed with QQ, but not everyone has a computer, so the chances of students going to Internet cafes are greatly increased. The teacher even used the measure of fined 20 yuan for entering an Internet cafe, but still failed to make the students' feet obedient... …

QQ is an instant chat device developed by Shenzhen Tencent Company. Because it is convenient, fast, and has various functions, and the cute "little penguin" also adds a bit of charm to QQ, it is deeply loved by teenagers.However, the Internet is an overly complicated place. Many students do not have the ability to distinguish right from wrong online, so they are deceived online, and countless students have suffered from it.The Internet is a very convenient thing, but if it is not used properly, it is only a harmful and useless thing. QQ makes it difficult for students to study seriously, and they cannot recognize scammers when they encounter them on the Internet. All this makes parents and teachers worry.

Students, the Internet can be used by us, but the key is how we use it.

The author uses lively words and vivid and interesting language to describe social and school QQ enthusiastically and calmly, and then makes a more in-depth analysis.This reflects the young author's ability to think independently.The article combines narration and discussion, the narrated examples are convincing, and the discussion is born from the narration, which is not vague, so the article's thinking is more profound.

Inside and outside the class
A most impressive language class

Cai Qiuying

In my elementary school life, there was a Chinese class that was deeply imprinted in my mind.That day, as soon as the pleasant bell rang, we sat and waited for Teacher Jia to come to class. "Hey, thump..." There was a sound of footsteps, and Teacher Jia came in with a stack of textbooks. "Huang Tiao, come out!" Teacher Jia pushed the glasses on the bridge of his nose and shouted sharply.Damn!This "naughty king" must have gotten into trouble again, alas, a reprimand is inevitable.I think.It was terrible for Teacher Jia to get angry.Especially those eyes, like sharp swords, stabbing straight at you.My heart is like fifteen buckets fetching water—ups and downs.There was no sound in the classroom, and we didn't dare to breathe out.

Teacher Jia grabbed Huang Tiao's clothes, pulled him out of the classroom, and closed the door with a "bang".Then, he returned to the podium and cleared his throat.No, the "storm" is coming!I thought, and couldn't help but get scared.

"Students..." Huh, what's going on?Teacher Jia's face has turned cloudy, and he is full of smiles.What medicine is sold in his gourd?really weird!I was puzzled, and the students were all agitated.Teacher Jia said: "Do you know what clothes and pants Huang Tiao is wearing today? What shoes is he wearing?" "Ah! I didn't pay attention." Looking at Teacher Jia, we couldn't answer.

At this time, Teacher Jia opened the door and "invited" Huang Tiao in, let him stand on the podium, and said humorously: "Student Huang Tiao, I wronged you just now!"Huang Tiao looked at us with doubts, looked at us and laughed, and followed us with a smirk.

Only now did we see clearly that he was wearing a white shirt, a pair of dark blue trousers, and a pair of gray sandals.

Teacher Jia then started the topic: "Students, we should pay attention to observation and pay attention to the characteristics of things. In this way, when we write a composition, we can..." He said with a smile.

"Oh!" Only then did we suddenly realize that our frowning brows relaxed, our hanging hearts fell to the ground, and we breathed a sigh of relief. At the same time, we admired Teacher Jia's unique teaching method.

We straightened up and listened to Mr. Jia's vivid lecture with great interest.Sometimes we stare with wide-eyed, breathless eyes, and sometimes we laugh.Listening to Mr. Jia's class, I forgot about other things. I was happy and worried with my classmates, and I was completely in the joyful classroom.

"Ding Lingling..." The bell rang for the end of get out of class, huh?How time flies today!We happily bid farewell to this interesting composition class in the voice of Teacher Jia's "goodbye, classmates".

I will never forget this Chinese class.

The material selection of this article is novel and true, and the conception is ingenious and peculiar. From the initial "suspense" to the final "truth revealed", in the vivid narration of the young author, the image of a kind, funny and good at teaching teacher is vividly displayed in front of us.The language of the characters is vivid and clean, and the details are well grasped.

celebrity in class

Yi Wang
Do you want to know the famous people in our class?So let me introduce them one by one.

Let me first introduce you to Liu Yan, the teacher's right-hand assistant. She is the study committee member of our class and has been in office for four years. The teacher also trusts her very much, and she is in charge of discipline.Because she managed the naughty boys in our class submissively, so those boys nicknamed her "Wu Zetian".But no one dared to yell in front of her. If she heard it, they would blow their beards and stare at the slightest, and punch and kick at the worst.

The little boy with thick head and big eyes is the "little painter" Liu Gang. His paintings are among the best in our school, and he is quite famous.Especially the ink paintings and animal paintings, hey, they are simply amazing and vivid.

"Sun hat, sun hat, I put a hat on the sun..." Hey, whose voice is this!Oh, it turned out to be Wang Jia. She is a famous "little poet" in our class. Several poems have been published in "Fengling Weekly".She not only writes poems well, but also sings well. She has a fair and delicate face, and a pair of high myopia glasses on the high bridge of her nose.

Then I will introduce to you a gentle and gentle male classmate named Zhang Pan. He usually speaks softly and even runs like a little girl. Therefore, he got the nickname of "Fake Girl".But he is very good at studying, and he is in the top 5 in every exam.

There is also a calligrapher who is famous for "drilling" in our class, and she is Chi Na.Once when reviewing and correcting a composition, the teacher criticized a classmate who wrote sloppyly. When Chi Na was called, she stood up blushing. No one took this matter to heart.From then on, she insisted on writing two articles in lower case every night. After a month, the characters that used to be silly, ignorant, and lacking in style had already changed into another look.

Speaking of Jin Xiaoming, the "master of humor" in our class, "He is a man, there is really no way to deal with him!" This is the evaluation of our class teacher Mr. Zhou on him.Whenever the teacher criticizes him, instead of being angry, he just smiles.At this time, the teacher's anger has long been swept away by his laughter. If the classroom atmosphere is too serious, he will interject from time to time and tell a few jokes to liven up the classroom atmosphere.Once, when there was a recreational activity in the class, Jin Xiaoming rushed to the podium and said in a drawn-out voice: "Students, the topic I'm talking about today is: how to be a real man." The audience burst into laughter, It made the teacher dumbfounded, and couldn't help laughing out with a "puchi".He went on to say: "We must abide by discipline in class, otherwise we will eat eggs (be criticized). Another point, we don't fight with those young ladies. We must use the belly of a gentleman to measure the heart of a villain. If we have a small stomach , I’m calling you a man in vain. Well, today’s speech is over.” After finishing speaking, he ran out of the classroom.In fact, it was the girls who coaxed him down.

When it comes to the "little writers" in our class, Jiang Liyan is the one.The articles he wrote are paragraphs, paragraphs are paragraphs, not to mention how appropriate the words and sentences are.The teacher often read his essays aloud to the class. If there was any composition competition, he either didn’t participate.

The little author grasps the characteristics of the characters, and describes "Wu Zetian", "Little Painter", "Little Poet", "Fake Girl", "Humor Master" and "Little Writer" through descriptions of appearance, language, and actions. Vivid and lifelike.The subject matter is novel, and it is a remarkable feature of this article that it is good at using typical examples to describe the character of the characters.

Is the test paper interesting?

Lin Xingyu

Our mid-term test paper this time is an interesting test paper.There are a few words at the beginning of the test paper: Students, it is the golden autumn season when the melons and fruits are fragrant. After studying for half a semester, you must have gained a lot!There are also many fruits here. As long as you examine the questions carefully and write calmly, you will definitely get this sweet fruit.I wish you success.This passage is really interesting. It not only compares the knowledge we have accumulated to fruit, but also refers to the midterm exam as the golden autumn season.One sentence brings us into a situation where a good harvest is in sight.

For the first question, you must not have imagined that reading pinyin, writing words and choosing the correct pronunciation are called "Happy ABCs"!How fun! "Chewing words", can you guess the content of this question after reading this question?I don't think you can guess it!There are 4 small questions in this question: supplementary words, group words, choose words to fill in the blanks, and draw words that are not of the same kind. "Being a referee", as soon as I saw this topic, I thought, there are only referees in the competition field, and there are only invigilators in the exam. Where are the referees!I continued to read, it turned out to be a judgment question! "Sentence Kaleidoscope", this topic is my favorite, because kaleidoscope is fun and beautiful, so will "Sentence Kaleidoscope" be more desirable?The first trial question turned out to be a transformation of various sentence patterns. Do you think it is interesting? "Reading through train", after hearing this topic, what do you think of?If you can pass this reading question smoothly, then you will reach your destination directly like taking an express train.Do you have this level? "Mini composition", the word "mini" will make you have infinite reverie, it can let us plug in the wings of imagination and write better composition.It's finally time for "Extracurricular Expansion", and it's time for us to show our talents.This question has a total of 20 points. Many students read a lot of extracurricular books and do it with ease, but what about me?It took a lot of brains to score 11 points.well!It's all because I don't usually read extracurricular books, and my knowledge is narrow.

After listening to my introduction, do you think this test paper is interesting?I think this paper allows us to do the questions easily and consolidate what we have learned in an interesting exam.

With the implementation of the new curriculum standards, our textbooks have changed, the teacher's teaching methods have changed, and even the test papers have changed.Compared with the previous stern-faced and cold test papers, this test paper by the author is indeed interesting, more life-like, and can stimulate students' passion for learning.The full text is written in a tense and happy tone in one go, just right, and it can be called a masterpiece.

Exam Symphony

Chen Ying
Performers: All students in class six (3).

Commander: Mr. Chen, the invigilator.

Prelude
The exam symphony is about to kick off, and the students are scrambling to study hard!This prelude is quite imposing, listen to, "The thread in the hands of the loving mother, the clothes on the wanderer..." "Wish to ride the wind and break the waves..." The voice of the book is loud, one after another.Hey, I have never heard such a majestic prelude to a symphony.The students hope to "grind their guns before the battle, and shine even if they are not bright"!

First Movement (Sonata)
It's time to send papers!After practicing hard for a semester, just read this paper!The students couldn't wait to take the papers, and before they knew it, the first movement of the exam symphony had already begun.I looked at the paper, and my heart turned cold. Needless to say, I knew that this paper was not easy to do!Start answering the paper!Following the conductor's "wave of the baton", the students hurriedly wrote.Ah, this sonata should be in B-flat major. The students wrote it like a cloud and flowing water. The major key of the friction between the paper and the pen is worthy of being a good sonata, but it is a bit intermittent... Time waits for no one. 10 minutes passed, two 10 minutes passed... the sonata came to an end.

Second Movement (Super Rhapsody)

The music is halfway through, and the students are now tackling those annoying "Apollo" super-big problems!No, look at me.I think, I think, I think! "Withered vines, old trees, faint crows", how do you write the "vine" of "withered vines"?No matter how wildly I fantasized and racked my brains, I just couldn't remember.Look at the other students, who are also thinking hard, playing the rhapsody attentively!Rhapsody, fantasies, even if you make it up, you have to fill in every blank!

The third movement (Fantasia + Little Rhapsody)
After the performance, some students don't need to fantasize anymore, so they start to fantasize about how to "enjoy wildly" after getting "excellent".But for some students, time does not allow them to fantasize, they have no choice but to continue to fantasize, continue to think wildly, come up with a bit and count!Although this short paragraph is not very harmonious, the theme is the same: I want to get "excellent", and I want to get 100 points in the test!
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Stop playing!As the commander "dropped the baton" and closed his fist, it was time to hand in the paper!Some students just reluctantly pressed the paper for a while before handing it in.This exam symphony finally came to an end.How is the result?God knows!
In this article, the author compares an exam to a symphony, which includes Prelude, Sonata, Super Rhapsody, Fantasia + Petit Rhapsody, and Epilogue, with distinct layers, and each part captures the character's personality and psychological activity characteristics.The form is novel, the language is also very funny, and it has written its own unique style, reflecting a relaxed, lively and eclectic free style of writing.

our class

Zhang Xinrong

Speaking of our class, you must not be familiar with it!Our class - the second class of the fourth grade is a friendly group composed of 37 students.

The students are not only harmonious and united, friendly and helpful, but also very interesting!Take tall, short, fat and thin as an example, it takes up a few "most" words.If all the students in the five classes of the fourth grade stand on the playground, the tallest student is Li Yue from our second class; the shortest and the smallest student is also in our class, and that is Zhu Kun.As for the fattest student Tian Yu, he can be regarded as a "big fat man"; as for the thinnest student, Xu Bo is as skinny as a skinny monkey.In addition, there are two "most", Wang Tao, who speaks the loudest, many people speak at the same time, and his voice reaches people's ears first, and everyone calls him "tweeter"; Zhang Yu, who speaks the least, Only when everyone is so quiet that you can hear a needle drop on the ground, can you hear his voice... They are really different, each with its own characteristics.You said, is our class interesting?

January 3rd is Zhang Qian’s birthday. She invited several close friends to her home to play. Several students gave Zhang Qian birthday presents, although they only gave a few pens and notebooks. , but it is full of the spirit of unity and friendship among classmates and deep friendship.

Zhu Ke fell ill, and the cadres of the class committee proposed to send some representatives to visit her.The students also took the initiative to pool some money with you one yuan and my five cents, and bought some condolences for Zhu Ke.After arriving at Zhu Ke's home, everyone greeted her with care, asked about Zhu Ke's condition, and helped her with her homework.Zhu Ke was very touched. She said with deep emotion: "I am so grateful to the class. The students came to see me and helped me with my homework. I feel very happy living in such a big group that helps and cares for each other." !"

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