* This is my first novel, so you can expect a lot of mistakes and even dissatisfaction, (like some people say for only reading about 5 chapters and saying that the story has not been built well.)+ You can also expect a somewhat poor or bad grammar, since
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* This is my first novel, so you can expect a lot of mistakes and even dissatisfaction, (like some people say for only reading about 5 chapters and saying that the story has not been built well.)
+ You can also expect a somewhat poor or bad grammar, since English is not my native language, so you can find many mistakes but I will always try to correct them and write a good grammar. (In the first 10-30 chapters I think the writing and coherence of the grammar is poor...) +
The construction of the world, scenarios and so on is explained slowly as the story goes by, maybe at the beginning there are several things that are not understood but that is explained later and not only in one or two chapters, (please give it a chance to read more chapters and if you are still dissatisfied you can throw this away or say your reviews). Besides, do you know any story where the world and everything related to it at the beginning of the story is explained COMPLETELY? I think not, that's why it is explained slowly so as not to fill you with too much information that you would later obviously forget and have to read again to remember some things.
If in only 5 chapters you want to get a whole explanation from the stages of cultivation to even the mysterious laws and secrets of the heavens and so on, as well as finally criticize the story because it doesn't meet your expectations in only 5/10 chapters, then this novel is not for you ;) . You can look at other short novels where it is a total of 100 chapters and they quickly end up with many holes in the plot. Here I will take my time to explain the events and so on as the story progresses. I'm not an editor or an experienced writer, so I'm just getting started in this area.
The stages of cultivation are also clearly explained in the later chapters and not in the first 5 chapters, as well as other things mentioned in the first chapters. The identity and power of MC is also explained in the future and his specific strength is made known.
If there is any problem with all this then I will cancel this novel so that there will be no disagreement or rejection :) *
A great expert and powerful Immortal of the Immortal World, decided to sacrifice himself to save one of his disciples and send her away from the place, while finally he was dragged toward the immense and dark abyss.
But inexplicably he was moved to the void, where apparently the Great Dao itself would take his life and soul to show him the true meaning of the Dao, but thinking of his dear ones, he refused to die and defied the Heavenly Laws at that moment, resulting imminently in his defeat.
Later, he wakes up and realizes that he is still truly alive but has apparently fallen to a lower plane, a small world where the Chi spirit is scarce and there are demonic beasts that attack a City that seems to be the only possible human settlement in that whole small world, while humans practice a type of ancient martial arts to become stronger.
However, his cultivation is still there, but it is currently restricted and enclosed by the same Heavenly Laws. In short, he has a Heavenly Seal that restricts almost all his might.
What will Ling Tian do in order to return to the Immortal World while gradually removing his Heavenly Seal so that his cultivation and power return to him?
Ling Tian will slowly understand the mysteries and conjectures about the Great Dao itself, realizing that there could be great danger in the future concerning all forms of life and existence
+ You can also expect a somewhat poor or bad grammar, since English is not my native language, so you can find many mistakes but I will always try to correct them and write a good grammar. (In the first 10-30 chapters I think the writing and coherence of the grammar is poor...) +
The construction of the world, scenarios and so on is explained slowly as the story goes by, maybe at the beginning there are several things that are not understood but that is explained later and not only in one or two chapters, (please give it a chance to read more chapters and if you are still dissatisfied you can throw this away or say your reviews). Besides, do you know any story where the world and everything related to it at the beginning of the story is explained COMPLETELY? I think not, that's why it is explained slowly so as not to fill you with too much information that you would later obviously forget and have to read again to remember some things.
If in only 5 chapters you want to get a whole explanation from the stages of cultivation to even the mysterious laws and secrets of the heavens and so on, as well as finally criticize the story because it doesn't meet your expectations in only 5/10 chapters, then this novel is not for you ;) . You can look at other short novels where it is a total of 100 chapters and they quickly end up with many holes in the plot. Here I will take my time to explain the events and so on as the story progresses. I'm not an editor or an experienced writer, so I'm just getting started in this area.
The stages of cultivation are also clearly explained in the later chapters and not in the first 5 chapters, as well as other things mentioned in the first chapters. The identity and power of MC is also explained in the future and his specific strength is made known.
If there is any problem with all this then I will cancel this novel so that there will be no disagreement or rejection :) *
A great expert and powerful Immortal of the Immortal World, decided to sacrifice himself to save one of his disciples and send her away from the place, while finally he was dragged toward the immense and dark abyss.
But inexplicably he was moved to the void, where apparently the Great Dao itself would take his life and soul to show him the true meaning of the Dao, but thinking of his dear ones, he refused to die and defied the Heavenly Laws at that moment, resulting imminently in his defeat.
Later, he wakes up and realizes that he is still truly alive but has apparently fallen to a lower plane, a small world where the Chi spirit is scarce and there are demonic beasts that attack a City that seems to be the only possible human settlement in that whole small world, while humans practice a type of ancient martial arts to become stronger.
However, his cultivation is still there, but it is currently restricted and enclosed by the same Heavenly Laws. In short, he has a Heavenly Seal that restricts almost all his might.
What will Ling Tian do in order to return to the Immortal World while gradually removing his Heavenly Seal so that his cultivation and power return to him?
Ling Tian will slowly understand the mysteries and conjectures about the Great Dao itself, realizing that there could be great danger in the future concerning all forms of life and existence
- 1 Chapter 1 – Am I Still Alive?
- 2 Chapter 2 鈥?The Strongest Demon Beast
- 3 Chapter 3 – Divine Star Continent
- 4 Chapter 4 – Wrath of the Heavenly Dao
- 5 Chapter 5 – More Powerful than Legend rank?
- 6 Chapter 6 – Mu Shuiruo
- 7 Chapter 7 – Siblings
- 8 Chapter 8 – Problems
- 9 Chapter 9 – Martial Arts of the Divine Star Continent
- 10 Chapter 10 – Punishment of the Heavenly Dao! Sealed Cultivation
- 11 Chapter 11 – Mysterious Little World?
- 12 Chapter 12 – Abduct Mu Shuiruo?
- 13 Chapter 13 – Decision
- 14 Chapter 14 – Recovery
- 15 Chapter 15 – Sincerity from the Heart
- 16 Chapter 16 – Trust
- 17 Chapter 17 – Reflect on the Depths of your Being – First Unlocking of the Heavenly Seal!
- 18 Chapter 18 – The Beautiful & Cold Night Fairy
- 19 Chapter 19 – The Disease of the Beautiful & Cold Night Fairy?
- 20 Chapter 20 – The Determination of the Beautiful & Cold Night Fairy
- 21 Chapter 21 – Strange & Mysterious Vine in the Consciousness Sea
- 22 Chapter 22 – A Plan to Control the Demon Beasts?
- 23 Chapter 23 – Mu Family History
- 24 Chapter 24 – The Training of Zhang Family Members
- 25 Chapter 25 – Another Brother?
- 26 Chapter 26 – The Five Great Beauties of Star City?
- 27 Chapter 27 – The Five Great Families of Star City
- 28 Chapter 28 – Begin the Plan to Weaken the Zhang Family
- 29 Chapter 29 – Rage Over One-Self
- 30 Chapter 30 – Five Demon Beasts King Rank?!
- 31 Chapter 31 – Escape
- 32 Chapter 32 – Healing a Beautiful Woman
- 33 Chapter 33 – Unexpected Surprise
- 34 Chapter 34 – Desperate Situation
- 35 Chapter 35 – Mysterious Person Sent from the Heavens
- 36 Chapter 36 – King Rank?!
- 37 Chapter 37 – Suspect
- 38 Chapter 38 – Running Away?
- 39 Chapter 39 – The Zhang Family Commotion (1)
- 40 Chapter 40 – The Zhang Family Commotion (2)
- 41 Chapter 41 – Is He Here?
- 42 Chapter 42 – Investigate His Whereabouts
- 43 Chapter 43 – Kill Him
- 44 Chapter 44 – Alchemy With Mu Shuiruo
- 45 Chapter 45 – Admiration
- 46 Chapter 46 – Meeting Again with the Beautiful & Cold Night Fairy
- 47 Chapter 47 – Yun Mengxin
- 48 Chapter 48 – A Woman’s Heart
- 49 Chapter 49 – Demon Beast on the Upper Peak of the Foundation Establishment Stage?
- 50 Chapter 50 – The World Tree Intelligence
- 51 Chapter 51 – Suspicion
- 52 Chapter 52 – Alchemy Association
- 53 Chapter 53 – Problems in the Alchemy Association
- 54 Chapter 54 – Ignorant
- 55 Chapter 55 – Slap in the Face
- 56 Chapter 56 – Great Master Alchemist?
- 57 Chapter 57 – Tang Wanying
- 58 Chapter 58 – Problems Halfway Through
- 59 Chapter 59 – You Dare To Go Against Me?!
- 60 Chapter 60 – She Is Poisoned
- 61 Chapter 61 – Memories
- 62 Chapter 62 – Exposed Plot
- 63 Chapter 63 – Removing the Poison
- 64 Chapter 64 – Engagement?
- 65 Chapter 65 – The Tang Family Happiness (1)
- 66 Chapter 66 – The Tang Family Happiness (2)
- 67 Chapter 67 – I Found You
- 68 Chapter 68 – Master?
- 69 Chapter 69 – Helping Mu Shen with his Romantic Interest
- 70 Chapter 70 – Sighting of Hordes of Demon Beasts?
- 71 Chapter 71 – Blessing from the Heavens
- 72 Chapter 72 – Demon Beasts Crossing Space?
- 73 Chapter 73 – Plans
- 74 Chapter 74 – Gratitude from Tang Jingtian
- 75 Chapter 75 – Sworn Brothers
- 76 Chapter 76 – Complex Feelings
- 77 Chapter 77 – Denying Marriage
- 78 Chapter 78 – Mu Shuiruo’s Attempt
- 79 Chapter 79 – The Call from the Depths of the Soul
- 80 Chapter 80 – Yun Mengxin in Distress
- 81 Chapter 81 – Feelings of the Heart
- 82 Chapter 82 – Love Blossoming Under the Moonlight (1) [R-18]
- 83 Chapter 83 – Love Blossoming Under the Moonlight (2) [R-18]
- 84 Chapter 84 – Love Blossoming Under the Moonlight (3) [R-18]
- 85 Chapter 85 – Deadly Fight Outside the Star City Walls
- 86 Chapter 86 – I Won’t Smile at Anyone Except for You
- 87 Chapter 87 – The Truth
- 88 Chapter 88 – Amazing Cultivation Capabilities
- 89 Chapter 89 – Dual Cultivation [R-18]
- 90 Chapter 90 – Results of the Immortal Secret Art: 'Yin-Yang of the Heart”
- 91 Chapter 91 – Get Other Wives?
- 92 Chapter 92 – Unexpected Visitor
- 93 Chapter 93 – Fight the Ming Family?
- 94 Chapter 94 – Battle for a Goddess
- 95 Chapter 95 – Show of Power
- 96 Chapter 96 – A New Legend Rank? (1)
- 97 Chapter 97 – A New Legend Rank? (2)
- 98 Chapter 98 – Plan for Dealing with the Future Demonic Horde
- 99 Chapter 99 – Women Really Are Insightful & Tenacious After All
- 100 Chapter 100 – Circumstances
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